Update 0.05 available for $5+ patrons.
Added 2018-08-31 19:52:17 +0000 UTCThe update is finally ready. The changes compared to the BETA versions are in the last scenes of the game after the dinner with the neighbors, as long as some minor dialogue changes for the scene in the police station.
$5+ patrons can get it from here.
I'll make it available for $1 patrons on September 2nd. And the public version will be released some time next week.
Enjoy it and let me know what you think.
Thank you.
Comments
You did well the specify, because I'm thinking about it all the time :P
stoperArt
2018-09-04 08:15:11 +0000 UTCThanks, Jess :) Yes, there's a little something already in 0.05.
stoperArt
2018-09-04 08:14:14 +0000 UTCAnd i mean in the game lol
JessicaAshley
2018-09-04 05:27:31 +0000 UTCJust a question...ive only just found this game today...played and its very good i am a fem who lives in Australia i have only seen ver.01 which is pretty cool...anyways just wondering if u have or are thinking about sum girl on girl action???anyways just a though.great work mate keep it up xox
JessicaAshley
2018-09-04 05:26:39 +0000 UTCI'm all Team Birch. Tho Mr Parker is an AWESOME character. It's like a Xmas Miracle if he got to get it on with Jess. He'd be born again. For late game/ending stuff - I'm def a pregnancy guy - depending on what male character Jess decides to conceive with. In all seriousness, Stoper, I'm sure everyone throwing ideas at you are just us brainstorming. Going for none of our ideas are not deal breakers (even for the Pt pledgers, I'm sure). I personally like how none of your situations have devolved into an outright porn script with characters just spontaneously being possessed by the bimbo symbiote and just orgying it out. Bottom line - this game should cater to YOUR tastes first, and I'm sure most people would like the direction you take it. :-)
Dashole
2018-09-02 16:03:33 +0000 UTCIt's a possibility for sure. We'll see :)
stoperArt
2018-09-02 11:06:48 +0000 UTCHey Stoper. Have you considered the angle of Jessica 'corrupting' Rosa at all? Like, right now Rosa is very against using sex appeal, but maybe Jessica could persuade her to the benefits (and thrills) of it? And that could eventually lead to them double teaming some guy. Like, with just teasing or going all the way or both. Could be a fun way to include this kind of thing beyond Jessica simply spying all the time.
bos
2018-09-02 08:08:52 +0000 UTCPerhaps instead of making Jess spying on them, you could approach a different pov. Doing something like "meanwhile, Rose/Blake is doing something" and show it. It is a common approach in Japanese netorare visual novels where we play as the MC, but there are some hints here and there that something is up with the wife and then a change in pov to show what the wife is truly doing while the MC is somewhere else.
VK
2018-09-01 19:08:42 +0000 UTCPersonally, I love the "slow-burn" approach you're taking to the story. So many erotic VNs on Patreon jump into the cheating sex 2 min into the game! I find the initial teasing and voyeurism that Jess is engaging in to be a realistic slow slide that a girl of her strong personality would engage in. I especially like the Officer Donovan scene and how that didn't devolve into a straight up BJ under the monitor stand (as much as I wanted it to). Jess just hasn't become that desperate for a scoop 3 days into the job! Overall, I find the story super-engaging, which is rare thing for me for VNs. Finally, I find I'm actually taking the time to read the story (rare for me) and appreciating the gorgeous characters and environments from an artistic and technical viewpoint. It's like I'm playing a classic Sierra game - Jessica O'Neil's Press Quest! You made me care about getting Jess to the top of her career pyramid - any way she can! Bravo!
Dashole
2018-09-01 15:26:56 +0000 UTCThanks, mate. There will be scenes with the girls enjoying some male attention. I'm just trying to find the right approach, because spying on people constantly would get lame at some point.
stoperArt
2018-09-01 08:32:14 +0000 UTCI'll drop by some quick thoughts here: Conner might not me a feet guy, but I'm definetely a feet guy, lol. You could explore this fetish. Rosa and Blake are the most beautiful girls on the game after Jessica. I'm not into lesbians so I do hope you have some scenes involving guys with them! Specially Rosa that is married and could do some cheating, lol. Nice work with Jessica's hair on the shower. You were right in doing some changes in her hair as you previously stated. Oh, and I laughed at the scene on the couch when Conner reciprocated what Jessica did to him in the shower! Nice job there, lol. Looking forward to future updates and Jessica's gradual corruption!
VK
2018-09-01 03:39:11 +0000 UTC
