Small Update
Added 2024-10-02 20:34:35 +0000 UTCenough people on SB have noted the name "Shemla" being "wrong" for the Huragok character that I decided to rename it to something more fitting for the naming conventions in Halo.
So Shemla is now "Shifts with Breeze".
Also, Sarah Enlectra apparently wasn't Admech enough, so I found a name generator and kept going until I found one that sounded good to me. She's now...
Ariel-Omicron-7, or Ariel for short.
So yey, I suppose.
Comments
Thought the names were fine personally, sure the Huragok name themselves based on how they float but most Huragok aren't as there as Shemla. The admech like to name those born in the order with pseudo alpha numeric sequences sure, but they also induct a fair number of outsiders that show potential in the ways of the omnissiah so her original name was fine too by me
Temperus Maximus
2024-10-02 23:48:53 +0000 UTCIt's fine...sorta. Editing with the program is easy, as I just replace Shemla with Breeze and all of them are replaced in an instant. It's the posted chapters that are an issue. Fortunately, I was only at chapter three elsewhere but here. So, I just have to Ctrl+F and replace...all 60 instances. At least I'm at chapter 10 now and not 100...
GundamChief
2024-10-02 21:07:20 +0000 UTCI noticed the name being off with Shemla but when I saw how many chapters you had already I figured you wouldn’t change the name 😅
Lictor Magnus
2024-10-02 20:45:21 +0000 UTC