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Our Life 2: Step 2 Prologue Preview Script Snippet

So, this is a new kind of post around here, haha. It's a preview of the script itself! This lets me show more of a scene than screenshots could. Let me know if you'd like to keep seeing these as part of the update rotation throughout OL:N&F's development or if it'd be better to share story things in screenshot form only.

Also, here's the text not in image form, if that makes it easier to read:
“The transition of seasons brought about an entirely different atmosphere. There were sights and sounds and feelings that could only happen during a few months, before they were gone for a year.”

“Other familiarities were lost to time for good, never to come back, but instead for their absence to eventually become old in their own right.”

“You knew that acorns were beginning to fall along with the leaves, and that Bob’s Barber Shop on Main Street closed eight months ago, and that everyday there was a new rumor on what was going to replace it.”

“Nothing concrete had been announced yet, but any day now for sure.”

“Mrs. Baumann was stubbornly convinced it’d be a restaurant- an Italian restaurant. The town needed one of those, she would insist.”

“Yeah, that was less about what she thoughtwould actually happen and more what she wished would come to be.”

“Circumstances were never as perfectly straightforward as stuff that was the “same” and things that were “different”, or what you could be “certain of” and what you were “believing in”.”

“You could have a piece of your world that had been ever-present, something that hadn’t gone away for a moment, yet right before your eyes it could stop being what you’d originally known.”

“The example that came to your mind, that you had been imagining from the beginning, was your left and right next-door neighbors.”

“Both Qiu and Tamarack were the same people you’d seen basically every day for four years.”

“No single one of those days did you decide they weren’t Tamarack or Qiu anymore. Of course, they always were literally who they were.”

“But after everything they’d learned and seen and from the basic concept of getting older, the two were pulled into certain… directions. Little by little. It couldn’t be caught looking back a week, or a month.”

“Still, if you paused to remember them from your first meetings and compared that to who you expected to encounter that day, you could see it clearly- starkly.”

“They had changed.”

Our Life 2: Step 2 Prologue Preview Script Snippet

Comments

We're not gonna have any large elements of the story or world be voted on, I'm afraid.

GB Patch

I can't help but wonder if Bob’s Barber Shop being gone by Step Two can have something to do with the Kickstarter. Can be an idea for one of the tiers. But my vote go for it to be a Cafe. That or a shop that both my MCs would love to have in town.

Jay

ahhh!! omg i love it!!! so excited!!

kyuuketsukiinu

OOooooo love this snippet!

Emi K

ouughh prepared for ✨change✨

ian

(✪㉨✪)ʕ ꈍᴥꈍʔ

Nightale

Oh, I love these snippets so much!! And thank you for adding the text version too, it is easier to read! :)

Sapphira Dae

Love this!!! Thanks for sharing!!

asleepyromantic

Ohhh that makes sense!

Pineapple Greyhound

I like to switch the order so neither one seems like the automatic priority in the MC's mind!

GB Patch

I don't know if it's out of line to suggest things: Weird nitpicky thing on my part is that one sentence says "Qiu and Tamarack" and the other sentence has them reversed, and it mildly bothers me, I feel they should be in a consistent order one way or another. In any case, I do absolutely love this, and would love to see more of these.

Pineapple Greyhound

Growing up in a small town, I can relate to the MC seeing gradual changes that can alter that town over the years. I really like how the changes to Qiu and Tamarack are like the changes to the town. It happens slowly, gradually, until the changes come along and it's a surprise how it sneaks up on you. A corner small bakery that I loved as a young boy became a gas station (which apparently it was before I was old enough to remember), then a convenient store (which had a Subway store inserted in it towards it's end) until the local high school was closed down. Now it's a 'alternative recreational smoking shop'. People who recently moved in this year would've never knew all the history behind this location. It would always be this shop, at least until it becomes something else, years from now.

Psykes

I second the Italian Restaurant, we need garlic bread! Very cool to see the script like this!

Flightwings

Ohhh this is so cool to see!!! It feels so special being able to read this off the script itself! 💕💕💕💕

Lonely_Mermaid

AHHH I need more of the growing babies!😍

Mary Hoban

You are so talented 🌹🌹🌹

Trinity

Seriously your writing is amazing, i can't wait so see this in the game 😍🥰

Anna Bia

I would love to see more of this in the future

A Swedish Lynx

Seeing part of the script would be nice (^^)b the text without the image was easier to read like you said

Joonie

Oh, this is very cool! I'd love to see this added to the rotation, though I hope we will still get story previews in the old 'image' format like we used to as well. Both are nice in their own way.

Mialiya

Ah this makes me so excited! It sounds brilliant 🫠🩷

gee Cartwright

This is cool, I’ve always wondered what your scripts look like

Sepharaaa

I Absolutely love it!(^人^)

Emma's dreams

I think this script form is good! Great work, and be sure to take breaks. ♡ (^▽^)

Queen Bayo

This is great! I would love to see these more!

Rane

Oooh I love the idea of seeing the script! It makes you want to imagine the scenery yourself! Definitely anticipating how this snippet leads into an older Qiu and Tamarack. And loving the autumn imagery- and Bob's Barbers thinks he's slick and I love it

Alyn Revilo

This is so neat!

A Non-binary Bee

Oooh this is cool!

Rowan

i love this so much 🙁❤️ id love to keep seeing these!

Kiwi

So pretty!! I'm excited to see more!

Kay


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