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AUDIOPLAY WIP: Calister's Rainy Day Secrets: [Devouring CW: Love Bite and Breathplay]
Added 2022-04-12 02:11:38 +0000 UTCYou and Calister come into his appartment from the rain and he insists you stay until the rain stops, however, spending this evening with him might reveal a few things...
A new vore audio about Calister! I'm still building out the vore sequence at the end and I need to do a few more listen-throughs, but its to the point you guys can help me!
Commentary is VERY valuable here before it ends up on YT forever, so if that premise sounds interesting to you, listen and comment! This is your chance to change an audio before it gets locked down so have at it!
Comments
Wow, this really makes one want to dive deeper into the lore of this world and I suddenly want to know Callisters entire backstory. Anyway, I thought this audio play was really interesting. Compared to your other, more relaxing and comfy plays this one had a strong sense of tension and excitement to it, which was a really nice change. As a sucker for vore, I'd of course have loved a bit more content at the end and perhaps some talking to the prey while inside, but that's just me. Also really too bad for the prey that they don't get to remember this magical night. Surely would have been unforgettable otherwise ^^
Ares
2022-04-12 16:06:20 +0000 UTCI don't know what to change about it, I'm not an expert with stuff like this, I'm about to listen to it right now but I always love your stuff, your channel was hard to find and as soon as I listened I knew this was it. I remember reading dragon vore stories on deviantart when I was younger. Some of the stories had no punctuation, others had phenominal detail. I guess one thing I would expect is inclusiveness, and how you convey that in the story is so magical to me Edit: I listened to it and I don't want you to put too much work to clean it up a bit, but is there any way the beginning part can be more clear sounding? Where he touched my lip before I could speak with his tail? Not sure if it's his accent or I just couldn't hear him clearly. it's not that important, but it's the intro, the wrap around one leg and so on was REALLY GOOD, just before I started watching the news I didn't get it at certain times on what was happening. I say this with love and respect to your work. Again I'm not an expert
One Dova
2022-04-12 15:49:48 +0000 UTC
