Chapter 242 - Narya
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Don’t blame him then as I was sick for 48 hrs with my 1st and headaches and aches and pains with my 2nd for a week 😬 get well soon Ivan 🙂
Chris Sherbourne
2021-06-03 05:35:38 +0000 UTCMaybe in another 6 to 7 hours.
jack
2021-06-03 00:56:21 +0000 UTCHe got vaccinated and it has given him headaches.
jack
2021-06-03 00:40:58 +0000 UTCIvan Kal , no chapter tonight I take it and not even a message as to why, I hope all is well m8 😎
Chris Sherbourne
2021-06-02 22:43:08 +0000 UTCAre you releasing chapter today
Logan hensley
2021-06-02 21:02:02 +0000 UTCHer mother's wants to change the family and praises her for making her own path, but at the same time allows others to determine which perks she gainst and puts her under constant guard because she doesn't trust her to leave. That is confusing. No wonder she had barely been able to keep herself sane.
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2021-06-01 12:55:58 +0000 UTC"Had been whispers of treason" - it's confirmed and in the past. "Has been whispers of treason" - currently circulating and not confirmed
2021-06-01 10:14:47 +0000 UTC"And...there had been whispers of treason" should be "And...there has been whispers of treason" I've noticed this a lot in your writing. I would really recommend looking up which to use when. In conversation it's very rare that you would use had instead of has.
robert eriksson
2021-06-01 07:54:12 +0000 UTCWeirdly, there are 8 cases of her name being spelled Nayra, but 20 cases of it being spelled Narya in this chapter alone. Pretty confusing.
ScottDR
2021-06-01 01:01:15 +0000 UTCAww spelling a major character's name wrong is tight
2021-06-01 01:00:16 +0000 UTCNice, I really liked this chapter.
Cardean Nasdre
2021-05-31 23:02:47 +0000 UTCThanks for adding the stats at the end of this chapter 🙂 and thanks for Nayra’s perspective of recent events of the last 3 years and how she’s coping right now and most importantly thanks for another great chapter in a fantastic series 👍
Chris Sherbourne
2021-05-31 21:44:45 +0000 UTCChapter name is wrong. It's Nayra, not Narya
2021-05-31 21:10:47 +0000 UTCWeird request, but can you make it so it's easier to distinguish which perks she got from the souls? Visually
Derze
2021-05-31 20:29:06 +0000 UTCReally hoping Ryun comes and demands her return with reparations
Taylor Bouchard
2021-05-31 19:52:05 +0000 UTCI where honestly expecting more souls afther 3 years. Or at least more happiness with the fact that she where able to save at least one. Considering how few she have saved...
Håvard
2021-05-31 19:50:43 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, thanks for all your hard work!
PB
2021-05-31 19:40:07 +0000 UTCI want Nayra to find a way to communicate with Ryun and Anrosh 😭
Daniel Canales
2021-05-31 19:39:10 +0000 UTCwoudl be interested in her attribute stats
s476
2021-05-31 19:39:05 +0000 UTCUummm... And the stats? Well, thanks a lot for this great chapter Ivan Kal!!
Juli Freixi
2021-05-31 19:38:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
BlackRazaras
2021-05-31 19:19:28 +0000 UTC