(Updated) Spotting Basil II - Final Draft DOWNLOAD
Added 2023-07-13 07:02:36 +0000 UTCAugust 30th Update: FlavorBabe has been redone to make her definitively a bear. Before she was a tiger/bear hybrid. This is for...reasons...later done the road. Muscles have been added to Ruby. A forward has been added recapping Basil First Issue!
This is a limited time download!! This version is exclusive to Fenris Press and the physical release and will not be available when it hits print in 2-3 months with more minor grammar tweaks as a professional editor will look over it. All public / patreon versions will be the original illustrations with updated dialogue and minor art tweaks.
I want to eventually get a complete change-log for this. But this version contains the following:
- Character design changes (Basil has stretch marks,
Abe has a yellow chest / belly, Ruby has muscles, FlavorBabe Redone) - 100+ Dialogue changes
- Bubble flow reordering
- Numerous redrawn panels
- Laguna Bonus pages included
- Various Typo Fixes
We're at the end of the road for Issue II. Thank you all for supporting it! Special thanks to the people who have been subbed since the start.
Mikro~
Comments
Stretch marks are a lovely little detail
Boing the Goat
2023-07-16 08:54:26 +0000 UTCAwesome! Thanks Mikro.
Luke
2023-07-14 12:57:48 +0000 UTC
