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Irwin's Journey 534: Welcome to the pond

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Thanks, hlad tp hearbit! Iol make a notento properly finish the boohm one much earlierer the story. Tang will be a while yet, butbhebisnt forgotten

Carrarn

I am reading the older books again. ... great as always... and I hope Irwin holds his promise to Tang and helps Boohm. Just my thoughts looking back from this chapters to older adventures :)

Thomas Wolf

That is fun idea ;) "Greldo's eyebrow raised a fraction.". ;))

Carrarn

You should do a side bit with other characters, but have each be a single sentence. Lol

Nathan Emerson

Please let luath be super happy and excitable, it would be such a fun contrast to ambraz's grumpy personality and Irwin's hard knock life personality

Jayden Martinez

I wonder if this is how twins feel but without the sickness

Slashman1

I agree. He already has the grumpy tsundere with Ambraz, so someone who exudes joy is a nice change.

Benjamin Walsh

I would like to see a Luath with the personality of a giant, curious, happy, puppy.

C-Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Stephen Pearson

Great chapter.

Midnight Reader

I feel like Irwin's personality is caring, focused, and determined. He doesn't like to be patient, but has learned how to be because he knows he doesn't really have a choice. Ambraz is of course arrogant and excitable, and the general tendency of the chaos whales seems to be curiosity and contentedness at a young age, with an additional love for music and for taking care of smaller and younger creatures later on. With these things as his influence growing up I feel like Luath might be an aggregation of these things, or he might feel like too much of an outsider and instead grow to compliment those things. Patience and a willingness to settle for less to temper Irwin's drive, humility and a respect for the world to bring ambraz down to earth, and an analytic mind to quickly understand the unfamiliar things he encounters. He would however have a somewhat limited set of experiences for an adult, depending on how varied the other neamnathair are and how much he is able to explore the large world.

Brian


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