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Writing journal

This middle section of The Murdered World is turning out to be sex scene after sex scene. I think something I might try with the next draft is to do a flashback/flashforward structure where we start with the characters in this trapped situation, then jump back to show how they got there. So instead of having long stretches of plot, then SEXSEXSEX, it'd be plot, sex, plot, sex, plot, sex. I know it's a well-used story structure, but I think it could work. I could even be all Alan Moore and go,...

Pooling Resources 2

Kirk danced his weight from foot to foot, trying to hold back his cum as her lips slipped from the very edge of his erection to the curly hairs that bordered it. Salma knew he thought that his launch would put an end to the ecstasy he was in, but she didn’t care. She wanted his cum and he would give it to her. No man could keep from letting her have exactly what she wanted.

Salma took her mouth from his cock and looked up at him. “Come until I can’t swallow it all. Give me more cu...

Don't Be Shy 6

Kara woke late at night, the windows dark. Few sounds made it through the thick walls of an upper-class dwelling, but she recognized the tenor of the city at rest. It disquieted her. One of the few positives of unemployment was that she’d grown used to staying up late, if she wanted, and sleeping in. At least late enough that it was fully dawn by the time she was awake.

It bothered her to be this well-rested at this time of night. She wondered if it was insomnia. A guilty conscience, ...

All A Hero Needs Is A Quest 5

The inn, built of easily assembled wood left rotting on the ground by a heavy storm, had not seen upgrade or much in the way of repair since its construction. There were many drafts in the haphazardly built structure, and it allowed in the stray orange cat as it allowed in many pests and peeping eyes.

The cat made its way through environs that were cramped, yet sprawling to the average man—the inn had been built with many winding corridors and small rooms for let, but not much headroo...

Writing journal X

Okay, I’ve got this month sewn up. Now I’m doing a little addition to The Murdered World—I realize now that most stories will have a big event, and they’ll show the immediate reaction to it, then they’ll skip ahead a bit to the point where the characters have accepted it and are moving forward. Star Wars, Obi-Wan dies, Luke screams, we cut ahead to him being sad, but it’s settled in for him. But those intervening scenes where it really sinks in for him, I think you rarely see thos...

Spider-Boy 3

She knew that Kon had to be even more out of his mind with lust than she was. And he had to be close to coming, because Felicia knew everything she was sucking and stroking was as sensitive as her pulsing cunt. Drool dripped from his meaty cock and landed on her breasts; Felicia rubbed the liquid into her already sweaty cleavage as she gleefully imagined how much tasty cum she’d be able to swallow and how much would spill onto her tits.

She had to make him come. She needed to make him...

The Bare 5

“Thanks,” Jinx shrugged. “I’m so tired of those guys thinking they can install me in the backseat of their rigs like I’m some sort of… bobblehead! I’m not for sale!”

“I know that, babe. It’s alright. Take it easy,” Dick said, coming up behind her and putting his strong hands comfortingly on her shoulders.

Jinx knew he meant that move solely to console her, but she responded to it with a lot more than simple relief. Her body had a lot to tell her and it wanted...

Writing journal

I'm setting a pretty rapid pace this month. I've got a lot of commissions done, including four chapters of Spy Wolf, and I've outlined the next couple chapters, so I might get a jump on those for next month. I also got done two chapters of Don't Be Shy, so I want to get another two chapters of that done and then four for next month. And I wanna keep some momentum going on Murdered World. I have, like, an obscene amount of word count for that fic already, maybe even to the end of the year, but...

Crime and Punishment

Mary Jane pressed herself tight to Peter’s costume as they flew through the air, weightless and yet moving with irresistible heft. Cool air whistled by, stroking her hair like a restless lover, but she felt warm. Not just excited by joining Peter on his webswinging, but heated by the feel of his feverish body pulled close to hers, holding her tight with only one powerful arm.

Besides which, she’d worn a jacket.

Suddenly, the smooth motion of their odyssey shifted. Peter was st...

Bone's Country 10

“Jefe, please, por favor, not like this, anyone could see, anyone could hear—”

“You think I oughtn’t show you off?” Bone growled, kicking her feet to either side so that her legs were splayed, enough room between them for a stallion to mount her. “Or maybe you just don’t want nobody knowing how much you enjoy being put in your place.”

In the heat of the moment, full comprehension was impossible. Like a fish on the end of a hook, it fought and fl...

Don't Be Shy 5

“Aaaa! Oohh! Gghn!” Kara could only squeal, over and over again, her hips full of motion not wholly her own. The pain was drifting away, proving to be the only thing that blocked the lascivious feelings now working their way into her body.

The more she strained, the more she felt, the more there was to feel. Good things, sensual things… she thought she’d just have to endure Lena’s attentions, but this was something more… depraved and perverted, it didn’t matter, i...

X

Didn't get much done today, but I did come up with a subplot I'd like to add during a second draft. I think it'll liven things up during a slow part of the story, add a little intrigue, I don't know. I've been pretty tired today and I need to get up early tomorrow, so I'll be in bed soon. Might try to get a paragraph or so done.

Big Black Costume update

“Shut up!” Jade cried, incensed now by the awful things Yolanda was saying. She’d known Courtney was a whore, but she thought that with enough punishment, she might be able to go back to being a true hero. The kind of woman Jade could be friends with.

Jade shoved the dildo into Yolanda’s mouth. Now she knew friendship was impossible. Yolanda had made Courtney totally debauched. It was no wonder Jade had given into her urges with that wicked minx. What else could you do when you ...

MtK update

Dick’s face was just above Mary’s. She trembled at the feel of his warm breath fanning out against her lips and cheeks. Dick kissed her: she moaned her mouth open, already seeking out his tongue with her own. They stayed together for a long moment, then Dick put his palms down beside Mary’s head, raising his torso from off her chest.

“Please, Dick, do it now. Fuck me now. Fuck my little pussy like you did Supergirl’s. I need to come like she did. I’ve always wanted to get 2024-02-28 21:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post

The Ravager 2

His drink arrived. Bond took it, touched his glass to hers, and then spilled it on the man on the neighboring stool.

“Hey, watch it!”

“Terribly sorry,” Bond said, with schoolboy sorrow, and took the man’s seat as soon as he went to wash up.

“Are you sure you can afford spilling drinks at these prices?” Penelope asked him.

“You’re right. Let’s buy a bottle and drink at your place.”

“After you went through all the trouble to sit next to me? ...

The Murdered World 4

‘Cockroach’ Flynn McAvoy was no one’s idea of a dashing cat burglar, but at five foot six, he didn’t need to be. There was nowhere he couldn’t climb, wiggle, slip, or crawl. And in his own way, he was as careful and as calculating as Frank Castle. Long before he picked one lock, he knew everything there was to know about his target’s security system, layout, and exactly what loot he intended to acquire.

McAvoy was returning from one of those preliminary excursions now, jubil...

ETA

Okay, I ran the numbers again and wrote a short little scene and now we are at 28 chapters, 38000 words written since last week, and 48000 words in total. Twelve thousand more and this bad boy is novel-length, which is good, because I have just a couple more sex scenes and some plot to cover. You never know, there might be enough for a sequel; just selected a good stopping point or cliffhanger sorta thing. I wanted to stop around 150 pages, like an old pulpy paperback, but apparently that's 3...

Yeep

In the past week or so, I've written 27 chapters of Punisher fanfic--enough for one update every week for almost seven months. The story in total is now 47000+ words long. Since the 17th, that is a little under 29 thousand words. I'm pretty sure at one point, I wrote five thousand words in one day. I'm tempted to do one more update, just to get up to a full 28 chapters and 30,000 words, but I think the vein may well be tapped for now. I told myself I was going to keep writing this until the s...

Summers Drive update

Celeste gave herself over to a long quiver of enjoyment. Her cunt convulsed madly and her eyes crossed from the immenseness of her climax. Emma’s words had seemed to set her off and waves of delight now rippled through her, inundating her wet sex, sending her over the edge and into feeling nothing but Scott.

“I’m coming!” she cried. “AAAGH! HNNH! It’s so good, so good!”

Mindee’s body quaked at the same time. Her cunt squeezed at Scott’s fingers, convulsing and sp...

Bone's Country 9

He reached down… petting the expanse of bare flesh just under the hem of her chemise. “I didn’t tell you to do that,” he said, teasingly flicking the hem up the back of her thigh and letting it fall back down.

Sophia turned around to beguile him with her lovelorn eyes. She was quick with an explanation. “I didn’t want anyone else to see me like this… I’m yours… for you only… please, love me. Touch me. Do whatever you want to me.“ All those words came free of Sophia...

Don't Be Shy 4

One hand nestled underneath the waistband of Kara’s lace panties. Kara felt the material bunch, twist, as Lena slowly peeled it down the sweep of her buttocks. She was barely anymore naked without the panties than with them, but the way Lena feasted on the sight… Kara was bent over facing the fireplace, feeling its heat on her face, but it felt like her ass was in the fire itself.

“You’re dripping, you know that, Kara? You have a pair of panties like a washcloth. I think I could...

We Bought A Harem 5

Tim needed to use the bathroom and Red Tornado had to pick up Traya from school, so the only adult supervision as Bart lost his virginity were the other harem members watching and realizing that it would soon be their turn.

The thought did not fill them with trepidation.

Even Aisha looked forward to sampling what Dania, Rahma, Nida, and Jinan were already enjoying. And she soon had a Scout of her own, as did the four women on all sides of her, and the sixteen women all around them...

Wedding of the Century update

Peter didn't know how, but he got the students calmed down and reading Chapter 5 in their textbooks while he took Mary Jane into the connected lab to talk privately. Privately he thought he deserved a medal for that, even though he had to concede letting the kids listen to music.

Someone produced speakers and before he shut the door to the lab, he heard an aux cord plugged in and the sound of Mary Jane herself covering Let It Go.

“No Autotune,” Mary Jane said proudly, once the...

Giving Her Host The Most update

“Get over here and take it then,” Harry rasped.

Molly came around and straddled Lash’s chest, feeling her full breasts pillow under her thighs as Harry wrenched his prick from out of Lash. Even as it came out, a rope of his cream spurted out and crossed Lash’s belly from navel to sternum.

Before any more was launched, Molly dropped her head into Harry’s lap and wrapped her lips around his cock. She caught the second blast of slimy ejaculate right when it burst free of hi...

ETA

It's taken almost thirty thousand words, which is like half a novel, but I've gotten to the point of the premise kicking in. Or the end of the first act, I suppose. 

I wanted this to be just an "opening sequence" of Punisher doing typical Punisher stuff before I interrupted the gameplay loop and revealed the twist, but now it's more like From Dusk Till Dawn, where halfway in we're switcharooing from the vigilante genre to something else.

The other thing is that I'm a little e...

Writing journal

Now I've written thirteen chapters of The Murdered World, and I have to write more because there's no way THAT'S lucky. Also, I have a few tabs of fallout shelter research open in Firefox, so I can't close those until I've written the next few chapters... pretty sure I'll stop before I have enough material for the next year.........

How It's Done

“Oh shit!” Steph cried. “It won’t fit! I—”

“It’ll fit real soon,” Bruce assured her, his naked body meeting hers, their mouths fusing until all the hunger in both of them was unleashed.

Suddenly she was all unbridled heat, a woman so full of passion that she forgot her nerves, but only until she felt his massive cock between her legs, the tip of him forcing itself between her small tight lips.

Stephanie gasped, bucked, and tried to back away from the slow, ...

Tri-st update

After you’ve all had your coffee, you deliver Betsy to Karen, who drives off with her, smiling and waving. Just before leaving, Betsy gives you a long kiss and reminds you that you won’t be rid of her that easily. She’ll be back: “And while I’ll share you with Karen and Felicia, I don’t want you running down your batteries with anyone else. Be ready—the next time I’ve got a moment to myself, I’m going to get a piece of you.”

“And what if Karen or Felicia wants a pi...

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Wrote like five thousand words the other day. Two thousand at a D&D session on my phone, where I multitask to keep myself from fidgeting, another five hundred on my phone while I was waiting for a pizza, then the rest staying up way too late on my laptop. It’s eleven chapters in all, which irks me a little because it’s one short of the twelve that would be three months of updates, but I think the vein may be tapped for the moment.

I’d like to be that far ahead on Spy Wolf and ...

Pooling Resources

Salma Hayek was delighted to find her old From Dusk Till Dawn costume still fit, though she didn’t look quite the same when she examined herself in the mirror. It was quite a bit tighter; her pregnancy had left her more heavy-set and her face didn’t have the natural suppleness of youth. She’d aged well, but still had to rely on a few surgical nips and tucks—as well as unforgiving diet and exercise—to keep herself a sex symbol as she neared her sixties.

Salma struck a pose, her...