TKES Chapter 79 Finished
Have fun peeps <3
I'm having a terrible day at the moment. I'll try to start 80 later, but I have no idea how far I'll get...
Have fun peeps <3
I'm having a terrible day at the moment. I'll try to start 80 later, but I have no idea how far I'll get...
Have fun people.
let me know if the descripion of the final area in this chapter feels appropriate. I didn't want to detail it too much, and frankly, I can;t be bothered to do so. I feel it would turn what is supposed to be pretty fast into a sludge.
But I hope it's enough for the reader to somewhat imagine it in their minds :)
Have fun peeps.
I just noticed that the dungeon experience might take multiple chapters which was more than I had initially planned, but I'm not sure if that's a bad thing?
Didn't get as much done as I'd like yesterday. I'll try to make up for it today. Have fun people <3
We should have some more action coming up. don't hesitate to toss any dungeon creature ideas my way.
Not entirely focused so there might be some odd things in this chapter. Don't hesitate to point them out. I'll likely start 75 in a few hours.
2021-09-07 14:15:50 +0000 UTC View PostHad a difficult time with this. I spent a large portion of the day thinking about the skills, and, moreover the special skill that would unlock with each of the three possible evo choices. I would love to hear your opinions on these.
They are not 100% final yet. I may have to make slight changes in the wording, and/or the balancing of things.
I do believe it's pretty obvious which one she will go for.
I also hope that the other two do look interesting enough for the reade...
A bit more fluff before action next chap. Have fun peeps <3
2021-09-05 14:58:36 +0000 UTC View PostMore fluff!
Also, more levelling next chapter!
Some action. Pog.
Working on 69 (nice) right now.
I am tempted to rename the Lesser Spirit language to simply Spirit Language. Read this chapter first and you will know why.
Thoughts?
I have some ideas in mind to speed up things a bit going forward regarding Kealyna's progress. I think we will see the first of that in the next chapter already.
I hope it won't feel too forced. I'm still trying to work out a few things in the background.
Let me know how the flow etc in this chapter works for you guys.
Do tell me your opinions on the new skills I made. I didn't want to make too many, and will likely keep things limited for as long as possible so it doesn't feel like there is a ridiculous amount of spells that she will never, ever use.
Might have to speed things up a bit to reach Arachne. In my opinion, it feels like it's dragging a bit out.
Your opinions?
Need to get to that sweet fluff sometime and start the actual adventure...
F L U F F <3
I have yet to finalize a few spell, but I've pretty much hit the target word count for the chapter.
Any suggestions regarding support/defensive SPELLS is welcome.
2021-08-31 12:40:49 +0000 UTC View PostHave fun peeps. as usual, please leave me some comments <3<3<3
2021-08-31 08:29:54 +0000 UTC View PostI hope the amount of world building feels alright so far. It's not a subject I'm particularly good at. I just had some feedback that it was quite lacking. I hope this at least offers a bit of it.
Let me know what other things you guys want to see or want to see answered.
Again, a hard chapter with worldbuilding (I hope)
2021-08-30 06:42:47 +0000 UTC View PostThis chapter is yet to receive any edits, which will likely be quite heavy as I struggled a lot during this. Don't hesitate to suggest edits in the file itself, especially regarding information that you would like to see, and/or explanations if things are unclear.
2021-08-29 10:57:59 +0000 UTC View PostI'm curious what you guys think.
Keep in mind it's an opinion poll.
I am not quite sure what I;ll do myself as of yet :P
Please let me know your opinions on the ending of this chapter. I am not certain yet if I'm going to keep it this way.
Do tell me your opinions and suggestions as the next chapter will depend on your answers.
I'll ask a few more people for their opinions as well.
Is it too soon for her to realize?
Does it feel natural?
These are the questions I want to address.
Have fun peeps <3 Let me know what u think :D
2021-08-27 08:53:28 +0000 UTC View PostBooyaa. I still managed to get a second chap done. Have fun peeps <3
Dont forget to comment <3
Let me know your thoughts, please <3
Does everything make enough sense? Is a question I'm always looking to answer, and I need as much feedback on that as possible for each chapter :D
Also, my internet has been out all day, it still is. Kinda sucky :(
Didn't feel too well today. I hope this chapter is still satisfactory. Let me know that you think Kealyna should go for after reading it. <3
2021-08-25 04:44:31 +0000 UTC View PostHave fun peeps. Let me know what you think <3
2021-08-24 03:49:15 +0000 UTC View PostI was somewhat blackmailed into writing some fluff. I hope you guys enjoy <3
2021-08-23 05:14:03 +0000 UTC View Post