Onyxdime

The Carmine Cheerleade - Issue #4 - Progress Report #1

Hi everyone,

Thanks for voting and suggesting lots of great ideas for the Issue #4 Miniboss!

I've been writing about Madison going for her job interview before she begins working the night shift. I'm currently up to 3,562 words.

Without any spoilers a rough estimation of how far I am is as follows:

1.) Introduction Scene - 100% complete.
2.) The Job Interview -  60% complete. (No rolls, just some character background etc. Should take me like 20 minutes to finis...

Patreon-Exclusive Poll - Design the Miniboss

Hi everyone,

Issue #4 is currently up to 814 words and the introduction to the issue is finished. I'm about to start writing Madison's interview. (With her newly acquired Stupid Slut rule coming into effect!)

While the peasants are all voting on how to equip the sexbot animatronics I thought I'd also do an exclusive poll for you guys.

The leader of the animatronics is going to be a miniboss before Doctor Professor. (If she even makes it to Doctor Professor)

Unlike the...

(Free!) The Carmine Cheerleader - Issue #3!

Hi everyone,

Sorry for the long delay. My partner and I adopted a puppy a few weeks back, and honestly, it's needed more attention than a human baby!

The dog has finally settled down now though and doesn't need my full attention, which means I can get back to writing!

Issue #3 of the Carmine Cheerleader is a fairly short one at only 5,696 words, so I'm not charging for this chapter.

Sorry again for the long silence! I'm back in business now though and will be jumping s...

Carmine Cheerleader Issue #3 Progress Report

Hi everyone,

I've had a busy week, but I've finally had some time to work on the next issue of Super Virgin Magical Girl.

I'm up to 4,188 words. It's a bit hard to tell how much longer is left in the chapter given the random nature - I'd estimate there's still a significant way to go before Madison breaks the robots (or they break her!).

Thanks for your continued support!

Onyxdime

The Carmine Cheerleader Issue #3

Afternoon everyone,

I've started work on Issue #3 of the Carmine Cheerleader. It's currently on 2,182 words.

Thanks for your continued support!

Onyxdime

Lovehammer Chapter 10 Released!

Hi everyone,

Thanks for your patience! Chapter 10 is now out on Hentai Foundry.

I'm going to take a break for a couple of days, then finish off the next Chapter of Super Virgin Magical Girl.

After that I'll be doing the Bedleyberk Ridge bad ending for Lovehammer.

Thanks for your continued support, and happy fapping!

Onyxdime

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - FINAL Progress Report

Evening everyone,

Chapter 10 now stands at 19,648 words.

June and Thuy's event is done.

I have 61 pages to proofread, which I should be able to finish tomorrow, if not tonight. After that I'll be posting to Hentai Foundry.

Thanks for your patience - the wait is almost over.

Chapter 10
Late Evening
-Saint Sanguinius’s Hospital (Short Scene) - 100% Complete.
-Alexi Shopping (Short scene) - 100% Complete...

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - Progress Report

Hi everyone,

A family crisis came up this weekend, so I didn't get a chance to work much on the final scene until tonight.

June and Thuy's scene is now 90% done.

I just need to add the final few sentences, finish proofreading, and then publish to Hentai Foundry.

Just make sure to temper your expectations. There is more plot than smut this chapter, but the non-canon Bedleybirk Ridge bad end is coming in chapter 11 which will be 100% lewds.

Happy fapping,
...

Lovehammer Chapter 10 Progress Report

Happy Friday!

Chapter 10 now stands at 17,570 words.

June and Thuy's event is turning out to be much longer (and lewder) than I originally expected. I'm not sure how much longer the dice will keep it up, but the two girls are in a bit of a pickle. I'm guessing that scene is about halfway done.

Would you be alright if I shifted the Bedleyberk Ridge Bad End to a separate chapter called 'Palatina's Nightmare?' While people vote on what to do in Chapter 10 I can po...

Lovehammer - Chapter 10

Morning everyone,

Chapter 10 now stands at 15,011 words.

Colette's story is 100% complete, as is the short scene with Palatina and Serena.

The only things left to finish are the non-canon bad ending for Bedleyberk Ridge, and a moderate length scene with June and Thuy which I just decided to add there now.

Chapter 10
Late Evening
-Saint Sanguinius’s Hospital (Short Scene) - 100% Complete.
-Alexi Shopping (Sh...

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - Progress Update

Evening all,

Chapter 10 now stands at 13,064 words.

The most popular choice in yesterday's poll was the 'what if?' bad ending for Bedleyberk Ridge, so that's what I'll be running with.

Colette's story is now 95% complete. However, due to... complications in Colette's scene I have had to add another scene with Palatina and Serena back at basecamp. Just a short one to keep the plot rolling.

Chapter 10
Late Evening 2020-09-28 21:36:15 +0000 UTC View Post

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - Progress Update

Hi everyone,

Chapter 10 is now just a few words shy of 10,000. (9,971 to be precise.)

A Genestealer Cult overwhelmingly won the vote, so that has been included as the enemy of choice in this chapter. I'm estimating that Colette's chapter is about 50% complete.

I still want to add a bonus smut scene as this chapter has been relatively light on smut compared to the others. I think I'm going to do what is currently happening to conscript Jenkins. I'm torn between three ideas. 2020-09-28 02:01:39 +0000 UTC View Post

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - Progress Update

Hi everyone,

Work was busy this week, so I didn't get much time to write.

I've continued working on Chapter 10 of Lovehammer today and brought it up to 6,795 words.

Just one quick question before I continue - I need an enemy type. Would you prefer Orks, Tyranids, or a Genestealer Cult?

Chapter 10
Late Evening
-Alexi Shopping (Short scene) - 100% Complete
-Colette returning from the Potassium Mine  - 10% 2020-09-26 19:49:27 +0000 UTC View Post

Lovehammer Chapter 10 - Progress Update

Hi everyone,

Sorry for the long silence. Busy couple of weeks at work.

I've continued working on Chapter 10 of Lovehammer today and brought it up to 5,865 words.

Alexi's scene is now complete.

I just need to do Colette's return to the Sisters' base, followed by a bonus smut scene.

Chapter 10
Late Evening
-Alexi Shopping (Short scene) - 100% Complete
-Colette returning from the Potassium Mine  - 0% 2020-09-17 10:03:59 +0000 UTC View Post

The Carmine Cheerleader - 'What if?' Scenarios.

Now that Madison is engaged with the trap I thought I would share my ideas on here for what exactly could have happened if any of the other traps had been activated.

The Gym
Weak - Madison’s panties will be stolen while she is showering after cheerleading practice. Will she be able to make it home safe in her miniskirt?

Moderate - The Supervillain bribes the cheerleading coach. Five of the cheerleading team will be invited to watch an instructional video af...

The Carmine Cheerleader - Issue #2 Released

Hi everyone,

Issue #2 of the Carmine Cheerleader has been released!

I found a natural point to split the chapter into two parts. I won't be charging anything on Patreon until the second half has been completed on Issue #3.

Thanks again for all the cursed clothing suggestions. Any that didn't make it into this chapter still have a very strong chance of making it into the second half. Madison isn't out of the trap yet!

Happy fapping,

Onyx

Super Virgin Magical Girl - The Carmine Cheerleader- Issue #2 Progress Report

Hi everyone,

Just a brief progress report. The next issue is up to 7,685 words.

I was wondering if you would prefer it to be split into two parts around the 10'000 word mark, or to have one continuous chapter. I'll only be charging once for the Issue regardless of if it is split or continuous.

The advantages of splitting the chapters are that it allows me to put more GIFs on Hentai Foundry. There seems to be a limit per story before they stop generating. It also makes it a s...

Super Virgin Magical Girl - The Carmine Cheerleader- Issue #2 Progress Report

Hi everyone,

Just giving you a quick progress report on The Carmine Cheerleader - Issue #2.

Thanks for the ideas yesterday - there was a metric tonne! Without giving anything away, I decided to include all of them in a jumble-bag and have them randomly selected as the encounter progresses.

I'm up to 5,490 words and I don't think I'm anywhere close to finishing this chapter. It's almost certainly to be a big one unless the dice do something unusual!

Happy fapping,

Super Virgin Magical Girl - Get your ideas in the story!

Hi everyone!

Just giving a quick progress report on the Carmine Cheerleader Issue #2.

I've started writing today and am up to 1,732 words. However, a LOT has happened.

I'm trying to avoid any spoilers, but an opportunity has come up in the story for some cursed clothing ideas that affect how Madison acts. I've decided to open this up to you guys since you are kind enough to support my writing!

So far, I've got Thigh Socks of Sluttiness, which will force Madison to hav...

Super Virgin Magical Girl - The Carmine Cheerleader - Issue #1

Issue #1 of Madison Lambert's story has been released! This time we're following the Carmine Cheerleader, Magical Girl and gullible idiot as she attempts to take down a supervillain.

Happy fapping everyone!

Super Virgin Magical Girl - Madison Lambert - Issue #1

Following the crushing defeat of the Pink Pussy I have started working on the second Magical Girl, Chicago College Cheerleader Madison Lambert.

1,186 words done so far, and I'll be working on it all day today.

While I'm working on this I thought I'd throw a poll how to see what age you want Madison to be. She's going to College, so anything between 18 and 24 works fine.

Super Virgin Magical Girl - The Pink Pussy -Issue #2

Issue #2 of Super Virgin Magical Girl - the Pink Pussy - has gone live on Hentai Foundry.

This is a free chapter, no one is getting charged for this. :)

Hope you enjoy it everyone! And don't forget to vote for what you want to see next!

Happy fapping,

Onyx

Super Virgin Magical Girl - Pink Pussy - Issue #2

Hi everyone,

I've started work on Super Virgin Magical Girl - Pink Pussy - Issue #2. 

The idea is that I'll follow a Magical Girl on missions until she is fully defeated.

At that point we'll take a different character and the Issue will reset to Issue #1. Kinda like self-contained short comics that you can jump into at any point.

This one will be released for free! 

I'm up to 3,498 words, but I've no idea what percentage complete this is given the ...

Super Virgin Magical Girl - Issue #1 Released!

Hi everyone,

The new story turned out much better than I thought it would!

I've included pictures and gifs alongisde the story on Hentai Foundry, but only about half of them loaded, so keep an eye out for links to pictures.

Thanks again for your support - let me know if you enjoy the new story, I'm personally really happy with it - but if there's any improvements you think can be made just let me know!

Happy fapping,

Onyxdime

Super Virgin Magical Girl and Chapter 10 - Progress Report #2

Hi everyone,

Chapter 10 of Lovehammer is about 80% done now, but I have decided to take a short break to write something else and give myself a change of pace.

This is going to be a much more lighthearted erotic comedy about woefully untrained magical girls going up against monsters, daemons, and supervillains. It's still got all the fetishes and content you know and love though - the women will be getting thoroughly lewded, corrupted, and impregnated. I've decided to try some new...

Chapter 10 - Progress Report #1 and Alexi Shopping Poll

Hi everyone,

I've ploughed straight into Chapter 10. A lot of positive feedback was received about the Administrator's political machinations and schemes, so I've decided to expand on his character a little bit. I'm currently up to 3,384 words.

This chapter probably won't have much smut - so I'm going to add one of the bonus smut scenes you suggested a few posts back.

This could very easily turn out to be a quick chapter of less than 10'000 words if the rolls go well for Col...

Commissioning Art for Lovehammer 40K

Hi everyone,

I've decided to use the money I got from Patreon to commission an artist on Hentai Foundry to do some scenes from Lovehammer.

Firstly, can anyone recommend some good artists on there that are open to commissions?

Secondly, any preferences for scenes? I'm leaning towards Bedleyberk Ridge when the Sisters were getting fucked silly.

All the best,

Onyx

Chapter 9 Released - Magic, Monsters, and Malevolent Manoeuvres

Chapter 9 is live on Hentai Foundry - happy fapping everyone!

Chapter 9 - Proofreading

We're on the home stretch.

I've begun proofreading chapter 9.

11/90 pages have been checked as of this post. I'm estimating I'll be done in 3-4 hours tops, with a posting going live in Hentai Foundry this evening!

Chapter 9 Progress Report - Really close to finishing!

Hi again,

Sorry for the long delay, I hit writer's block again with the dice. Then I had a great idea today and the chapter is almost done!

The chapter is up to 28,552 words. Alexi's scene is now virtually complete. I just need to write the voting options for what readers want her to do next.

I think I'll move the surprise bonus smut scene into Chapter 10 given that Chapter 10 will probably just be plot stuff at the end of the day.

Chapter 9
-Lorn...