Song for today "Epitaph" from the band King Crimson. Rawr!
Edit: Huge continuity error I made around Maagneil. He is the father of Broggart, so the uncle of Grimnir., not his cousin. Which means, the background I wrote around him was false, and I apologize for that. I honestly have no idea how I got that mixed up.
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“Train, incoming!...
2022-12-18 03:17:00 +0000 UTC
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“… Envy isn’t responding.”
“It doesn’t matter. Begin the council.”
Tarnished, harrowing, and macabre—these were a couple of adjectives the world outside of Bole’Taria would describe the demonkin’s home. A nation infested with eldritch horrors, sick beings, and twisted architecture. A Folschreckian mother would tell tales of these beings in a boogeyman manner, sending fear into the hearts of their children.
However, at the end of the day, while Bole’Tari...
2022-12-15 04:08:32 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Syntax and added the changes to how Hestia let Vifi go
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[“… You are not ready yet, Saori.”] His voice echoed in my head, souring my mood as I stared at his stone statue. The dark, musty smell of this plain, underground cave I was trapped in made his words hit harder.
“I know.”
[“Then why must you keep persisting on this point! Why must you act so recklessly?!”] The voice of the old wolf was filled wit...
2022-12-13 00:37:44 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Ellaine's Profile update after being away from Hestia added at the end.
Edit 2: Continuity error fixed.
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“Here.”
Ellaine handed to me something that appeared to look like an egg. This beige, spotted “egg” felt warm to the touch, but its shell was rough like sandpaper. Rubbing on it with my shoulder irritated my human skin, and knocking on it caused a deep rocky sound. I did not expect this.
“This is you...
2022-12-10 02:43:54 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Some continuity error fix
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The scene was turbulent, filled with furious, pained, and confused cries. Grimnir’s mana blast had sundered the earth, destroying a small section of it before the blue barrier protecting this hold flickered back in sight. The damage to the road wasn’t restored, even if the barrier was. So it was possible to break it!
In any case, with the smoke almost done dissipating and the hoarse orders of the Luedbrumdar clan’s le...
2022-12-07 02:47:17 +0000 UTC
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<[Battle Frenzy (Minor)] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
<Mana Release activated. Aura used as control unit: [Draconic Aura Lv. 4]. Territory [Magmakammer] has been established>
<Proficiency requirement fulfilled. [Territory Release Lv. 1] evolved into [Territorial Release Lv. 2]>
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Name: ...
2022-12-04 01:53:58 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Big changes! I did allude to them with my want for feedback. But, yes, people called the First Draft a connecting chapter, a filler chapter. However, while I knew that, it felt slow and unneeded. Sure, Dragon Idol is a slow burner, but even for my standard, that was not good content.
So, I still kept the connector part of the story, but altered it to be more fun and entertaining. Also, speeding some things up. This does mean there will be some stuff I added in the last draft missi...
2022-11-30 05:01:04 +0000 UTC
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Happy late turkey day. Gobble gooble.
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“Hesti-chan!”
“Kazumi-chan! Kohaku-chan!”
The voices of two girls pierced through the raucous roars echoing inside this stone house. Despite being backstage and inside a room that rocker Rosserto lent to us to rest in, you could hear his audience taking over. In any case, seeing my friends’ faces as they smiled at our group appearing made it impossible for me to not reciprocate with a hug.
I sque...
2022-11-27 02:53:51 +0000 UTC
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“Speak or die.”
“Grwak?!” The dwarf didn’t respond correctly, so I slammed his head into the stone floor, quickly realizing from the lack of a dent that something was protecting the floor. “Ghuuurk! Aka!”
“Boss!!!”
Hmm? But, from the sounds of it, the damage I inflicted is still pretty much what I expected. Good thing all these dwarves are suited up in heavy armor.
While the floor didn’t even show a small crack or even a s...
2022-11-22 03:16:35 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Added the changes on how Hestia let Vifi go
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“Mhmm, Hestia … Don’t worry, Mom is here for you, ehe.” She kissed my check, even wrapping her tail almost instinctively around mine. Almost as if the warmth of my body was agitating her to move. “Once we visit my lair, I’ll show you the icy vale of the wyverns. Beauty crystallized forever in ice. Mhmm. My jewel collection, ehehe …”
Mo...
2022-11-19 04:22:35 +0000 UTC
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Edit: I've changed what is written on the newspaper
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“Her shadow consumed you two?”
“At first, yes. Wrapped itself around us like a cocoon, just like how monsters evolve. The goddesses didn’t really tell us anything, simply suggesting that Sensei ‘just do it.’ Well, it’s not like them speaking would help us. Every time they speak, I get this damn itch that feels like it's coming from inside my head. Muffled words.” While his story was i...
2022-11-16 03:25:21 +0000 UTC
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“Grrraaaaaaaaa!”
Appraise them!
<Lv. 72>
<Lv. 54>
<Lv. 89>
Buffs!
<[Various Spell Buffs] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
‘Fuck them up, Original Mind!’ my parallel minds encouraged me, also feeling the rage boiling up inside me. Vampires were like elves, right? Well, right about now, they were no better than the grimgarians I kil...
2022-11-13 04:12:16 +0000 UTC
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Hey, everybody, somebody had suggested that I post a list of all the songs and their lyrics. So, here they are. I also included the description of Hestia's spell songs, too. I will be adding any new songs in here.
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A Sea of Trees - A Whole New World (Aladdin)
I can see from up here ♫
A sight, one can’t just forget ♫
Radiant sunshine, green mountains ♫
And a gap to divide it all...
2022-11-10 21:10:25 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Since I changed the Job System, here is also the new updated ones. It's new and fun looking, so have a look! At the start and around the ending.
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<Experience for development Jobs has reached multiple breaking points.
[Idol]: Lv. 0 -> Lv. 10 | Multiple reset accumulation finished | Prestige 2 Lv. 4
[Mage]: Lv. 0 -> Lv. 5 | Multiple reset accumulation finished | Prestige 3 Lv. 8
[Tyrant Hatchling...
2022-11-09 23:57:49 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy! Took a bit to outline and iron out the details, but enjoy the new uniques! Uniquer!
Edit: Took the feedback and adjusted the new Unique Job System. Took in account how I could better implement the System into the story and create future drama and plot points. While also keeping it sensible for the world.
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Up, down, back dodge, twi—No! Left! Woah!
“Hahaha, it’s been a while since we trained Hestia! You...
2022-11-06 23:12:56 +0000 UTC
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<Multiple proficiency requirements fulfilled. [Continuous Cast Lv. 6] [Mana Eyes Lv. 7] [Benevolent Aura Lv. 6] gained>
<423 human and beastman have become your followers>
<Total follower count updated. Total followers of [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]: 18403>
“Rank B. Hunter’s and Mercenary’s guild. Thank you so very much for all your help, Princess...
2022-11-03 22:25:53 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Smart Hestia is best Hestia. Changes to when Uzerra left.
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“Mhmm! Mhm, yup, this is delectable.” The pj-wearing elf slurped up the spaghetti in a manner like he was eating ramen, only for Tasianan to quickly correct his action by teaching him how to eat it properly. With the rolled up noodles around his fork, the man placed it back into his mouth and nodded with satisfaction. “What luck. I chose the correct day...
2022-11-01 02:59:52 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Changed the Divine Quest reward into something more meaningful of a reward
Edit 2: Also added Neill mentioning forcing Vifi into an oath and have Hestia stand by her decision.
Edit 3: Added the changes I had made in how Hestia let Vifi go.
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<Unique skill creation completed. [True Spear Technique Lv. 10] [Evasion Lv. 10] [Acrobatic Lv. 10] [Air Walk Lv. 6] [Terrain Maneuvering Lv. 6] [Mid-Air Maneuvering...
2022-10-30 02:40:50 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Some syntax edits and also changes done in accordance with chapter 362's changes.
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“So, Qaltil is dead and we failed the job.”
“Right, boss—Urgh …”
“… Well, at least you’re alive. Although missing an eye, a leg, and having your stomach nearly separated into three sections will surely take you out of the dance … Considering what they managed to destroy and obtain, it seemed this new Champion just won the high stake bet....
2022-10-26 21:33:42 +0000 UTC
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“Ooooooh, my goodness…”
In the divine realm of the Goddess Aurena, the goddess in question herself fell back on her chair with a relieved expression. She lightly slapped her spotless face, moving it up and down in an attempt to calm herself. She opened up a single eye, watching Hestia’s participation in the Elyonda siege once more, before letting out a deep sigh of contentment? exasperation? delight?.
She closed her golden-colored eye after a while and fixed her posture, b...
2022-10-25 01:38:29 +0000 UTC
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Edit Logic fix with the [Room] runes.
Edit 2: I changed the ending and how Vifi'Yok's and Hestia's discussion ended. This was to keep true to Hestia's personality without making it seem too idiotic from a character point-of-view. I will be using this change to alter the future chapters.
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<Territory deactivated. Territory Dispute completed in favor of individual [Sunfang Dragonewt, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor] and [Violetshock Kirin-Dragon, Fargryneill Q...
2022-10-22 20:45:27 +0000 UTC
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What a fitting scenery.
A lava field had consumed the island below, turning water into hardened rock and earth for platforms. As toxic gases and lava fountains threatened anything below, boulder-sized molten earth began to levitate up to the sky, joining the intricate web of dragon paths. As such, a small island, just large enough to accommodate my mammoth-sized dragon body.
A kirin-dragon dragon skipped and galloped in the air and on small floating rocks, menacingly pointing her ...
2022-10-20 02:07:35 +0000 UTC
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Extra long since the last chapter had been a while. I mean it when I say long. As in, longer than my usually long chapters. Enjoy and take your time.
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Even as [Dragon Fire] continued playing through my [Telepathy], my three comrades next to me began to panic as the waterfall of fire began to gush down on us. However, seeing me simply stare at the demonkin shouting a chant of their own, my companions quickly calmed themselves...
2022-10-16 22:51:32 +0000 UTC
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<[Prayer (Major)] [Music Resonation (Moderate)] [Various Spell Buffs] inflicted on [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]>
A giant water beam shot right out of Karhalantheel’s mouth, soaring through the stormy skies at the silver dragon dancing in the air in front of it. Its tentacles and appendages tried to swipe at her, dragging her down into the ocean. From the damaged spots on her ice armor and how her underskin was showing, it see...
2022-10-10 00:59:29 +0000 UTC
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<Experience has reached multiple breaking points. [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor]’s Secondary Job [Flame Lancer] has risen from [Level 12] to [Level 20]>
<Attributes have increased due to level up>
<Max level of Job [Flame Lancer] has been reached>
<Experience has reached multiple breaking points. [Young Sunfang Dragon, Hestia Atsuko Kargryxmor...
2022-10-06 12:25:10 +0000 UTC
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If you haven't read last chapter's second draft yet, please do.
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The most common type of grimgarian were the goblins and kobolds. Ogres, trolls, even orcs weren’t as often seen on human soil mainly due to the hunter’s guild targeting those grimgarians, as they were more threatening than unintelligent monsters.
A nest of goblins left unperturbed could grow into an entire colony within weeks due to their rapid gestation period and, coupled with th...
2022-10-02 15:59:29 +0000 UTC
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Hey everybody,
I just wanted to inform you guys I will be going on plane to visit my grandparents soon. The flight will take a while, and I would also like to have some time for the family reunion, so the next chapter will take a while. I'll continue the chapter releases during my vacation whenever I can, as I do wanted to bring the current arc to an end and not delay it further.
Thank you guys for your patience!
2022-09-25 21:21:59 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Pretty much a rewrite of the chapter since I didn't like how I did it. Flowed less well, and I think I put the character focus on the wrong characters. As such, it's pretty much a new chapter.
Also, since I am still on vacation, it took this long. To be honest, I rewrote this yesterday, but decided against releasing it then. I will have the next chapter ready a few hours later. When the US reader are awake. So most of my EU and SE Asians readers can pre-read this, and then underst...
2022-09-25 02:04:36 +0000 UTC
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Since it's played so often, just gonna have to remind you guys. Les Miserable "Do you hear the people sing" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2crRmKlbfxM&t=88s
Edit: Addition to the ending. Wrapping up some loose ends.
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“S-Sealight?” Anasthasia mumbled Renee’s surname in surprise as the returned knight came out of the room and erected an [Air ...
2022-09-22 00:30:25 +0000 UTC
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Edit: Concerning last chapter
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“Kuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh!”
“Kraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!”
Mother was above me one second and clashing with the leviathan in the next, creating a massive shockwave with the force of the blow. Another tsunami was created from this attack, ripping right through the ice sheets Mother’s Territory created, but fortunately Tehmrayn jumped forward and swung his trident down, forcefully stopping th...
2022-09-18 03:39:34 +0000 UTC
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