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Part 2 - Page 16

This page took a while to get right - those first three panels especially. 

I made a sketch-up model of the cafe floor and the kitchen behind - hopefully this will help with speed and more interesting camera angles in future.

Muffin Topp - Part 2 - Page 15 Timelapse

I'm looking into other ways of promoting the comic, and making videos seems to be the only method that's being recommended.

I'll start uploading time-lapses of the completed pages if that's something you'd be interested in seeing. I've never watched a full one of these back before, but it was nice to the see the progression and decisions being made.

If only the pages actually took 30 seconds to complete...

Dough Life Strip - 2

EDIT: Fixed her left foot - it was definitely at the wrong angle.

Aware that I'm not running the strip in the right order here, but I'll stitch them all together sequentially into one when they're all done.

Part 2 - Page 15

I'm sure you can see where this is heading...

Dough Life Strip

EDIT: Amended a couple of bits because they really didn't look right - Muffin's left arm covering her belly was wrong for a start. Much happier with it now!

I'm going to do another strip series of Muffin, this time from her current outfit when she's going to meet the Campbells - it's not the most revealing of outfits, but it still works for me.

This image should technically come later on in the series, obviously - I just wanted to draw a nude, colour Muffin.

Part 2 - Page 14

Part 2 - Page 13

I was having difficulty getting that second panel right, so strayed off into stripping Ellie of everything but her shoes and lab coat. Thought I'd share for prosterity.

Maisie's Honeymoon - Pin Up 1

I'm planning on Maisie's Honeymoon being the first Patreon exclusive story - more soon!

Part 2 - Page 12

I didn't realise how unsettling the words "Miss Red's coming!" were going to be in this context, but as it was meant to shake Ellie out of her dream, I went with it.

Part 2 - Page 11

This is the loosest I've ever written a comic, which is allowing me to come up with mad stuff like a Doctor Who-style fantasy sequence I had no idea I'd be drawing when part two started.

My marker for this scene was simply that Red meets up with her top R&D/science head Ellie to check out Bunny's sample.

Then, putting my p*rn head on while fleshing the scene out, this happened.

Sketchbook - Muffin Outfits

Here's the first batch of sketchbook pages - sketches to help work out what outfit Muffin was going to be wearing for the remainder of part two.

Part 2 Page 10

Part 2 - Page 9

Coloured that last panel, because I'm sure I'll be able to use it somewhere else as a promo piece.

Part 2 - Page 8

Part 2 - Page 7

Here's page 7, along with a nudie variant panel without Bunny obscuring the view.

Also removed the background from the pin up of Muffin opening her towel up. It's a lot lighter and I think it works better.

Muffin - Coloured Panel Pin-up

Really liked this panel, so got rid of the letters and gave it a bit of colour.

Part 2 - Page 6

Following on from that last Bunny/Muffin pin up, I've decided to realise that full scene after all. This is meant to be a p*rn comic after all.

Muffin - Pin Up 2

Had this image in my head and was going back and forth on whether I should write a scene around it for part two. Decided not to, but still wanted to see the idea realised.

Part 2 - Page 5

Also added a couple of nudie-variant panels as a little bonus.

Part 2 - Page 4

Part 2 - Page 3

Part 2 - Page 2

It's not all T&A, I also try to do decent exterior shots...

Part 2 - Page 1

Muffin - Pin Up 1

The first of many pin-ups of a naked Muffin.

Muffin - Strip - 1

I'll be adding strip series for each of the characters, just in case you don't think enough flesh has been on show in the comic.

Here's the first - Muffin getting out of her work uniform.

Muffin Topp #1 - Download

Welcome! I'm kicking the Patreon off with a download of the first collected edition of the webcomic. The pages here are in higher definition than they appeared online and there's a sketchbook section to round it out.