Within my guest chambers, I grip the shard of black rock I brought away in my left hand. With my right, I rub my index finger along the length of a shattered rib bone.
The black rock resists affinities. Elementalists can control water, air, fire, and earth, but the elements themselves aren’t raw affinity. They are simply manifested and/or manipulated.
The black rock prevents the manipulation of the elements. Within Starbreak, elementalism is greatly stymied, and to attempt contr...
2022-12-30 22:09:00 +0000 UTC
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Two Days Later
Forming the tiger construct is easier the second time, taking less than an hour. I think I can get the number down to a fraction of that, given time to practice.
What started as an interesting idea, something to pass away the time while waiting for the black faction to bring me to Achemiss, has become more. The black rock’s unique properties may help me deal with Achemiss… and perhaps even challenges on my home world.
But there’s a seri...
2022-12-15 20:11:52 +0000 UTC
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I thought that Sindragos might leave me alone after the meal, that he’d gotten the information he came for; how naïve of me. The man is likeable–at least he seems that way around me. But I’ve grown tired of spending every moment outside of my chambers in his presence.
After Lucinda and Sindragos brought my counteroffer to their compatriots for deliberation, things have been in limbo. The black faction still hasn’t come to a decision. I can tell that Sindragos has been tasked wi...
2022-12-09 21:02:55 +0000 UTC
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Maria watched, listened, and contemplated. She found that stepping back and assuming the role of an observer allowed her to gain novel insights.
She spoke less. Listened more. But it also… disturbed her. Sometimes she worried that she was becoming less than she used to be, a phantom, slowly losing her sense of self. Neither seen nor heard. Disembodied as she was, attached to Ian, she had no material presence. Her impact on the world was filtered through him. Her independence ...
2022-12-04 02:51:44 +0000 UTC
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Mirror Scale Sindragos
A necklace hidden under my shirt activates, strengthening my mental defenses. Against a peak Remorse practitioner, my own defenses and the artifact wouldn’t be enough for a prolonged engagement. However, Black’s newest affinity is Remorse. With the suppression of the black rock, his affinity will be weakened enough that I should be protected.
The world freezes over as my practice expands. The walls of the chasm become coated in ice, forming an u...
2022-11-29 06:53:31 +0000 UTC
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I don’t really understand what Sindragos is getting at. How would the black faction know if they failed to understand me? Moreover, why would I ever trust what the black faction shows me? Already I have heard of their plot against Achemiss, to whom they publicly provide protection. I understand their desire to strip Achemiss of whatever item allows him to plunder mortal worlds beyond Eternity. However–in my eyes, such a reversal of loyalties reflects poorly on the black faction.
2022-11-25 23:50:55 +0000 UTC
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“Show me?” the man with the deep voice, Sindragos, says. “Go on, then.”
The room descends into silence; presumably, Lucinda shares her memories of the competition with those gathered. Where a peak Remorse practitioner would normally be able to rapidly impart memories, the black rock’s interference slows the rate of transmission. A solid two minutes passes before conversation rekindles.
“Can you explain what we just saw?” Sindragos asks.
“Black has a way to re...
2022-11-15 04:47:30 +0000 UTC
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I pull at the transformative energy of the dagger and Maria appears before me. She reaches out her arms to steady me, anticipating sudden weakness.
I stare blankly at my hands and bare wrists. I feel fine. Meeting Maria’s concerned gaze, I say, “It worked.”
“For now,” she says, her expression still severe. “In a few hours, you may have need of me again.”
I nod. “We shall see.” I turn to Red and clear my throat. He takes the hint and disappears into his quar...
2022-11-11 23:04:21 +0000 UTC
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Composed of the same black rock as the waterfalls, the fist is a midnight bastion, stark against the azure sky and the eddying clouds. The light of the false sun limns the fist’s contours, emphasizing the curve of each digit and the arc of its knuckles and palm. The light concentrates on the slight bulge of the wrist, forcing me to avert my eyes from the resulting glare.
Ascendant Cursory uses his wind elementalism to lower us down onto the massive bent joint of the thumb, its width s...
2022-11-08 06:10:45 +0000 UTC
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The field is no more.
All that remains is the classroom and the gnarled root-like branches that surround it. I have no idea what the wood is made from, but it’s more resilient than I ever guessed. Even blasting it with Death energy fails to significantly harm it, my power unable to penetrate through the wooden cortex.
Many people have stopped fighting and wait off in the distance; some have even departed the plane, uninterested in watching the end of the melee.
One person ...
2022-11-05 20:50:59 +0000 UTC
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I am blind and deaf. I have severed my sense of pain, blocking the screaming nociceptors that warn me of my body’s devastation. Vital vision only permits me to see the physical surroundings, so I fail to sense as Ascendant Meng’s blossom of annihilating darkness falls over me for the second time until it’s already eating into my skin.
I saw how easily the same attack killed the competitors. Just a second ago, the darkness descended upon me, lasting only a moment. That was enough t...
2022-10-31 23:18:58 +0000 UTC
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Ebon Pearl
Ebon Pearl knew what was coming, but that didn’t mean she was happy about it.
The tension in the stands and classroom was palpable. When Ancient Black laughed, his cold composure cracking, Ebon Pearl knew that the time for posturing was over.
Violence was imminent.
Crimson Teeth rubbed her snout, then activated a spherical artifact by cracking it against her head like an egg. A sticky fluid coated her length in an instant, writhing against her sca...
2022-10-29 03:08:26 +0000 UTC
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With the pronouncement spoken and confirmed openly, over a hundred disapproving eyes meet Holiday’s unflinching gaze.
This is all wrong. Holiday wants something. He wants me to do something and I don’t know what.
I think back to the moment I agreed to participate in Holiday’s experiment before I even knew the name Discardia. He exchanged an unbounded favor… in exchange for my participation along with Red.
He couldn’t have known how well Red would do at tha...
2022-10-23 22:11:37 +0000 UTC
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“My paper has no name written on it,” one competitor voices out loud, his serious demeanor betrayed by the slight upturn of his lips.
“Neither does mine,” a lanky man adds, a cheeky grin stretching across his face. He holds his paper up. “I don’t think this paper is mine; there must have been a mistake in passing them out.”
Holiday observes all of this with a neutral expression while seated at his desk.
Before I ask Red what’s happening, he performs a mental ...
2022-10-21 22:12:54 +0000 UTC
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Red and I return to reality with a jolt. I take a deep breath in as I reorient myself, taking note of all living things in the vicinity through both my vital perception and my Remorse affinity.
Two of the formerly occupied chairs are now vacant, suggesting that we’re the third pair to awaken. Holiday sits at a bureau at the head of the treehouse-esque classroom, his hands drumming on the desk. He makes eye contact with us and smiles.
“How was it?”
“How was what?” I...
2022-10-18 04:42:44 +0000 UTC
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“You come for me,” Bresnir continues. “It is an unwanted summons, though I suppose most would say as much. Imagine my surprise when not one, but two come for my soul.” Her demeanor is icy, resigned, but there is a roiling current beneath the surface. An unwillingness to give up.
“You laid a trap for us and hid,” Red states impassively.
“I knew no simple trap could kill an ascendant,” she replies.
“Why do it, then?”
“If I had not, you would have de...
2022-10-15 04:14:12 +0000 UTC
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The energy in my body dims as I suck my own life force to form the soul gem. The gem in my hand is only half-formed. A sense of dread fills me. Is this really my limit?
“Take my energy,” Red insists as the time left dwindles to fifteen seconds.
I don’t second-guess his generosity and reach out for his body, siphoning the energy away roughly, having no time to gradually drain him. With Red’s addition, I complete the soul gem–a tiny prismatic gem the size of my th...
2022-10-14 23:46:03 +0000 UTC
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[ i wrote 3 menocht chapters today, god bless finally getting restful sleep for the first time in soooo looooong ahhhhhh. expect more chapters later today to finish off the discardia arc! ]
I cross the sand dunes and once more find myself on the beach. The ocean smashes into far-off cliffs, merciless in its dismantling of the rugged rock face.
A flight focus and bones stream out from my void storage. A bone wyrm assembles, its bones clicking against one another and glowing with De...
2022-10-14 21:41:34 +0000 UTC
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My shoulders scream from the strain of controlling the wings. With Red out of range, I have no idea how many missiles are left. All I have are my reflexes and the arrowhead hovering over the impact point–where Red and I will meet, if we’re still alive.
Seconds pass with no new missiles. Is it over?
You’re too low for those missiles to reach, Maria thinks. But you have a new problem. You’re going extremely fast because of my wings, far faster than if you were i...
2022-10-07 21:23:02 +0000 UTC
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When we enter the next round, we aren’t immediately transported to Bresnir’s world. Instead, we find ourselves in the Hall of Ascension. Holiday–or a version of him–leans against one of the pillars in the main hall, his arms crossed against his chest.
“When you descend for your first assignment, you should expect two distinct phenomena.” A thick, soupy darkness suddenly envelops the surroundings. Holiday walks along the only source of light, an illuminated path made of white...
2022-09-30 18:28:35 +0000 UTC
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Holiday isn’t waiting for us when we awaken this time. I can just barely make out his form on the viewing platform, where he and other Hall of Ascension practitioners speak with a handful of competitors.
I sense Red’s distress immediately. His body is shuddering very subtly; even with Beginning, I wouldn’t notice unless I was looking for it. My vital vision reveals an inner turmoil, his vitality surging ferociously through his chest and limbs.
His eyes are wide and he just s...
2022-09-23 23:40:00 +0000 UTC
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I let Red navigate us. His expression is impassive as he runs scenarios and plunders the minds of sheltering civilians–and Bresnir’s agents, wherever they lurk below.
“Maria,” I ask. “What does your fatesight tell you?”
I see that if we kill Bresnir’s human goons, thousands will perish, she replies coldly. The chimeras are under no such protections, however.
“Based on what Maria sees and what I’ve picked up, there are...
2022-09-18 21:35:20 +0000 UTC
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[ note – I retconned the name of ian’s special dagger in book 5, since I never actually gave it a proper name and always just referred to it as the blade / dagger / knife. oops. it's called “the blade of revelation” – which happens to be the title of book 5, which is already complete. book 5 ends with ancient ash taking ian away to train. chapt 261 is the first chap of book 6, our current installment. i'm mentioning this now because ian is going to privately call the dagger by this ...
2022-09-18 00:02:02 +0000 UTC
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The second round is somewhat similar to the first.
The half-step ascendant is the same woman as before, though part of her backstory is slightly different. She isn’t based in one city, but rather lives on a yacht that navigates the world. Even if we knew the ship’s planned schedule, we doubt she’d abide by it now that her ascendant hunters are here.
“We could take your wyrm,” Red suggests. “Brute force it.”
I frown. “We don’t know what her ship looks like....
2022-09-12 16:12:59 +0000 UTC
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Ascendant Crimson Teeth
“You knew people would be frustrated by the new format,” Ebon Pearl remarks.
I mean, yes, obviously, but I didn’t think they’d just…
“Storm off?”
Essentially. Change is hard, I know that, but it leaves a nervous pit in my stomach to infuriate so many. I want this change to stick since it’s for the good of the Hall of Ascension.
The ascendant observers came expecting fighting and ...
2022-09-09 20:49:19 +0000 UTC
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Red and I travel through the dry grasslands until we reach the first signs of civilization. We slow our approach, Red scouting ahead with his Regret affinity and relaying the memories to me with Remorse.
When we ripped through the air, the wind of our passage offset the heat. While moving at the equivalent of a mortal jog, the dry heat sucks the moisture from my body. I can reduce the physiological toll with decemancy, but the environment isn’t conducive to spending time outdoors.
...
2022-09-05 20:05:29 +0000 UTC
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Lol, I was curious how an AI would predict this chapter would start.
Ending of the last chapter:
In the end, there’s really only one choice.
I rotate the button to the left. The icon of the skull glows in my vision. I press the button down and the other options become black and unselectable.
“Selection registered. Preparing Discardia.”
AI prediction:
The v...
2022-09-01 20:10:55 +0000 UTC
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If it’s proof Holiday wants, he’ll get it. The promise of a favor is too valuable to pass up.
“Ascendant energy is necessary to use the artifact we’ve discussed,” I point out. “I may need to use it during the competition.”
Holiday waves his hand dismissively. “Not a problem.”
Are you confident this won’t reveal our identities? Maria asks.
As confident as I can be. We will hide Maria’s face so Holiday won’t recognize her, but he...
2022-08-29 01:52:06 +0000 UTC
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According to Chowicz, if Euryphel introduced himself as an ascendant, Holiday would assume he was helping Ancient Black as a favor. Euryphel didn’t like lying so blatantly–the most believable untruths were half-truths and lies by omission–but he didn’t have another choice. Pretending to be a construct was off the table and revealing that he wasn’t an ascendant resulted in even more questions–and hostility.
Achemiss was infamous for capturing mortal peak practitioners and exp...
2022-08-27 04:36:49 +0000 UTC
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Euryphel struggled to keep his heart rate under control. Ian’s gaze was piercing enough to bore a hole through Holiday. He was pissed, and that was the last thing they needed. Ian was playing the unflappable Ancient Black–why would he care if he couldn’t use ascendant energy or artifacts?
He’d only had enough time to make two scenarios when Ian dispelled him a few seconds ago. He’d used them both to get information from Kaiwen Chowicz, who had been running scenarios. Within he...
2022-08-21 23:50:24 +0000 UTC
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