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Questions for Gralgiran

if you had the chance to interview Gralgiran, as someone living within their world. what questions would you have for him?

there is an interview coming up in the story between Gralgiran and the 'pirate' broadcast and I'm in need of questions. so if anyone had them feel free to suggest them. I don't promise they will all be asked, or answered, but I will select as many from them as I can

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 30

Tibs studied the animals throughout the room and classed them by how dangerous their attacks were. The raccoons had the longest claws, the

Tibs studied the animals throughout the room and classed them by how dangerous their attacks were. The raccoons had the longest claws, the rats sharpest teeth, and the rabbits fell between the two, but with the added ability to leap over the attackers distracting him.

He ran in. He wasn’t letting them take control of the fight this time.

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The Captain's Heart CH 85

He forced himself to watch the projection over the adjudication table. Jeremy, seated, calmly talking with a Ridoshi mentalist.

There was nothing there to make Gralgiran want to look away, other than the memory of how his Heart had ended up needing to speak to the mentalist. How he had failed Jeremy.

He should have known the Earthers were up to something when the station sought to assign Jeremy’s lodging with them. The administrators had no reasons to separate them, not unless a...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 29

Tibs took his time eating. He’d been surprised Firmen hadn’t addressed him as soon as he’d moved to gather wood for the fire. And because

Tibs took his time eating.

He’d been surprised Firmen hadn’t addressed him as soon as he’d moved to gather wood for the fire. And because of that, he’d built his camp here. Then he’d gone hunting and returned with two large rabbits. While they turned on the spits, he looked over the remnants of his leather pants.

There was ...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 28

The room he sensed, a distance ahead and after a turn, lacked a door, and the mass of life essence that moves about the floor contained no

The room he sensed, a distance ahead and after a turn, lacked a door, and the mass of life essence that moves about the floor contained no Wood. He couldn’t identify the other major elements, and of those he had, the mix was random, other than being in small pockets that gave the impression of movement.

A scurrying movement.

He didn’t...

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A Creature of War, Book 4, CH19

The six Anthros were seated on the floor against the wall. Alicia was there with Charlie.
“Not enough chairs, Sir,” she said at El’s raised eyebrow.
He smiled. “Thank you for keeping an eye on them. You didn’t have to. The men who came with them would have done it.”
“Yes Sir, but I needed to talk with you.”
“Alright,” El looked to the lizard.
“I’ll wait outside,” Charlie said.
“I’m sorry, Sir,” Alicia said the moment the door was closed. “...

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The World Which Is, CH 89

I step back, and I’m in the forest, without indication of anything other than trees ahead of me. Brandon doesn’t ‘poke his head’ out of among them, he appears next to me and takes in the lack of a ruin.

“Well, that’s a first,” he says, grinning, and steps forward.

There isn’t a transition to his disappearance, no ‘curtain’ parting to let him through. He’s here, then he’s gone. I extend my hand, feeling for…something. Then, I’m at the edge of the ruin. View Post

The Captain's Heart CH 83

The Saladin provided a narration as they guided him and Jeremy through the general area of the station and toward the temporary housing

The Saladin provided a narration as they guided him and Jeremy through the general area of the station and toward the temporary housing section. Gralgiran expected it would all make everything impressive to those who care for how much material had to be excavated to produce the metals needed for its construction, or the amount of work put in by the Reos...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 27

Tibs headed for the next room with care and reached the cache, halfway to it, without encountering traps or creatures. It contained a pair

Tibs headed for the next room with care and reached the cache, halfway to it, without encountering traps or creatures. It contained a pair of worker’s leather gloves in a darker leather than the armor. They would offer little protection, but were better than nothing.

Firmen hadn’t worked out how to arrange essence within the caches to make ...

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The Captain's Heart CH 82

“And rebuilding efforts are underway after the hurricane hit the Philippine Islands,” a man said in English as Jeremy stepping into

“And rebuilding efforts are underway after the hurricane hit the Philippine Islands,” a man said in English as Jeremy stepping into Gralgiran’s office. “The death toll is, thankfully, light, due to the islands’ advance warning systems. At last report, ninety-five percent of the population was evacuated in time, and those who couldn’t be reac...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 26

Tibs kept his balance as he slowly reached for the tile. Each line had two, sometimes three, tiles what didn’t trigger, but weren’t always

Tibs kept his balance as he slowly reached for the tile.

Each line had two, sometimes three, tiles what didn’t trigger, but weren’t always conveniently close for him to crouch on so he could test the next line. He was close enough a leap would let him land on the other side of the archway that marked the end of this trap, but he’d dec...

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The Captain's Heart CH 81

With them working opposing shifts, it made the one time Gral knew where to find Toom unavailable unless he wanted to leave Jeremy to sleep

With them working opposing shifts, it made the one time Gral knew where to find Toom unavailable unless he wanted to leave Jeremy to sleep alone. The current situation, if it even was one, wasn’t enough of an emergency for that. While he knew where Toom’s apartment was, his friend wasn’t often there when not sleeping. And not always, even then....

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 25

It was four days after his return that Tibs managed to leave the village without Joman trailing him. The first two days, he’d woken early

It was four days after his return that Tibs managed to leave the village without Joman trailing him. The first two days, he’d woken early to find the man already watching Mother Natril’s house. He spent the next night up, practicing etching, and Joman came to the house with Torus high in the sky.

He spent that day using Purity to keep the ...

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The World Which Is, CH 88

Brandon’s been quiet since returning from the old man. I’ve taken him at his word he went, mainly on that. He hasn’t been able to look at me since and I don’t think it’s because he’s hoping I won’t find out he didn’t do what I ordered him to. I think missing out on the dungeon also affected him. We all have better gear now. I won’t say it’s putting me on an equal footing with him, since experience goes a lot farther when it comes to surviving, but that punch wouldn’t hav...

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A Creature of War, Book 4, CH18

The message reached El as he was walking with a patrol. A fight among the construction crew. He ran there, and when he heard the sound, he knew the message had been wrong. This wasn’t a fight, it was too loud for one, this was a brawl.

El forced his way through the crowd and found the brawl. The handful of officers were keeping the crowd away, which was good, but they shouldn’t have stopped there. He looked, but Alicia wasn’t among them. Good. He’d begun trusting her with more a...

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The Captain's Heart CH 80

“Fuck! Don’t stop!” Jeremy put his hands in Gralgiran’s mane and held his head down in his crotch as he thrust. The things his Heart could

“Fuck! Don’t stop!” Jeremy put his hands in Gralgiran’s mane and held his head down in his crotch as he thrust. The things his Heart could do with that tongue. At this rate, he was going to—

The tablet on the table let out an ear-piercing screech, and Gralgiran hurried to grab the collar, leaving Jeremy’s crotch exposed to t...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 24

Tibs decided he was far enough from the village when there was enough light to take the sky from black through the varying shades of purples

Tibs decided he was far enough from the village when there was enough light to take the sky from black through the varying shades of purples and into pale blue. Only the village hunters would be able to follow his trail, and he doubted Joman could convince them to brave the forest to find him.

This should ensure he didn’t have to depend on ...

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The Captain's Heart CH 79

Jeremy looked over the design of the circuit he’d made as he walked. He still couldn’t see why it wouldn’t work once printed, and he hoped

Jeremy looked over the design of the circuit he’d made as he walked. He still couldn’t see why it wouldn’t work once printed, and he hoped Builder Atarikna Drogdromar could shed light on where his mistake was.

The growling stopped him by the sheer incongruity of hearing an animal on the ship. Unlike humans, Kelsirians didn’t seem ...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 23

His stalker didn’t even hesitate to follow as Tibs entered the forest. He’d expected Joman to turn around once he realized where he was

His stalker didn’t even hesitate to follow as Tibs entered the forest.

He’d expected Joman to turn around once he realized where he was going, but his determination to prove what he believed, was stronger than the fear his experience in the forest had to have instilled.

Tibs had decided that four days were enough for Firmen and Merka...

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The Captain's Heart CH 78

“Of all the fangless, egg-sucking, insect for a brain—” “Gral?” He ignored Jeremy’s call as he stormed to the door, but it served as a remin

“Of all the fangless, egg-sucking, insect for a brain—”

“Gral?”

He ignored Jeremy’s call as he stormed to the door, but it served as a reminder that he wasn’t alone in the apartment.

“Gral, what’s wrong?”

“Later,” he snapped, his anger utterly misdirected. He was in the hall, the door clos...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 22

Tibs felt the guard’s eyes on him as he carried the man to the tavern. He’d been surprised she hadn’t run off to warn others. Of what? Tibs

Tibs felt the guard’s eyes on him as he carried the man to the tavern. He’d been surprised she hadn’t run off to warn others. Of what? Tibs wasn’t sure. It could have been to gather them so they could protect the village against what had to be some monster, since anyone before him hadn’t returned from the forest. Or to tell them he...

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A Creature of War, Book 4, CH17

“Well, yes, I guess we’re on time.” The man said, not sounding convinced.

“You guess?” The tone of Vee’s voice was sharper, not quite angry, but El wasn’t sure how long that would last. The bull had had to pull each and every answer from the team leaders seated around the table.

The man shrugged. “Yes.” He didn’t look up from the little food he pushed around the plate. For the amount of complaining they always did about how hungry they were, El expected them to...

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The World Which Is, CH 87

When I walk out of that fucking dungeon, all I want to do is crash. I remind myself Brandon is still in danger to push through that. Then I remember it’s three days to Louisville and figure he can last the day, or week, I’m going to spend unconscious. I sent my equipment to my inventory and the cool wind on my skin sends shivers that do nothing to wake me as I head to my tent.

The fact I’m crawling into its remnant only registers as I’m falling asleep, and it’s not enough to c...

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The Captain's Heart CH 77

Jeremy looked at his reflection. The frame holding the opaque lens wouldn’t win him fashion contests anywhere, but they held them over his e

Jeremy looked at his reflection. The frame holding the opaque lens wouldn’t win him fashion contests anywhere, but they held them over his eyes, and the curve he’d given them meant bright lights wouldn’t come from the sides either.

He was pleased he’d invested in a personal printer. The plan had been to print the circuits for his we...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 21

Tibs crouched, looking the room over. As he’d sensed, it was bare, except for wooden disks ranging from a couple of steps across to up to

Tibs crouched, looking the room over. As he’d sensed, it was bare, except for wooden disks ranging from a couple of steps across to up to eight or nine, set in the dirt floor. Pushing his hand against the ground caused it to sink, and resisted when he pulled it out; but it emerged clean.

It wasn’t mud, but it behaved like it. What he sense...

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The Captain's Heart CH 76

“You’re Heart isn’t joining us?” Litmir asked, as Gralgiran joined him and Lilmari at the restaurant’s table.

“He’s off with a couple of his friends at the reservoir.” A quick scan of the offerings and he placed his order.

“That must be a relief,” Lilmari said. “You were worried he wouldn’t be able to make any beyond that hunter you had looking after him.”

“The other’s also a technician. I’d like him to make friends outside of his work. People...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 20

“How does it know you made changes?” Merka whispered, just as Tibs said.

“How did you make changes?” He hadn’t meant to reveal he’d sensed what the dungeon had done. “I thought you weren’t allowed to make changes during the day?”

“Why wouldn’t I be allowed?” Firmen asked. “I’m as likely to have an idea for a new trap during the day than at night; and Merka’s right. How do you know I made them?”

“Wait, you know about days and nights?” He re...

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The Captain's Heart CH 75

Jeremy breathed slowly, trying to calm his nerves, hands on the waistband of his newly printed swimming trunks. Of course, today, the first

Jeremy breathed slowly, trying to calm his nerves, hands on the waistband of his newly printed swimming trunks. Of course, today, the first time putting them on, would be the day he decided to do this.

“You don’t have to do this,” an amused Thuruk said, putting his pants in the locker and showing far too much of himself, as far as the pa...

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Stepping Wild, Draft 2, CH 19

“How did it get the essence back in there?” a voice screamed as Tibs caught his breath. He was on his knees, his leathers ripped apart, but

“How did it get the essence back in there?” a voice screamed as Tibs caught his breath. He was on his knees, his leathers ripped apart, but he wasn’t hurt. He didn’t understand how that was, since the damage had been done before the audience.

The boon, then. It was what she’d meant by it. He wanted to go over the rest, but he had...

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A Creature of War, Book 4, CH16

Three days was how long it took. During that time, DHC’s police officers stopped a few arguments, but unrest in general didn’t seem to be a problem.
Other than receiving DHC’s daily report, El kept busy helping around. Anytime he started feeling useless, he reminded himself that humans had no powers, and that didn’t stop many of them from making contributions, so he forcefully ignored the despair that threatened to overwhelm him and he helped gather more soil for the greenhouse.<...

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