Th Chase 478
Added 2015-01-28 07:39:51 +0000 UTCOh Goddess the editing. Fifty seven paragraphs. Two hundred and two sentences. Four adverbs. Twelve uses of passive voice. Many many many hours spent picking it apart and putting it back together to make coherent sentences without using adverbs. Correction of tenses. And there still might be typo. I've been wrestling with this all day. Ugh.
