Th Chase 490
Added 2015-02-13 18:49:31 +0000 UTCThings should be returning to usual very soon. I was able to kick out a chapter during my down time. This afternoon I'm going to be busy as heck later. Let me know if I missed anything. I'm getting better at exterminating adverbs from the story with the exception of dialogue. Conversations feel a lot smoother and the transitions feel better. I think it still needs some work though. Tell me what you think.
