Text-only stories available for all patreons
Added 2019-02-26 15:40:40 +0000 UTCAll patreons can now access the first two text-only stories. You can search for them by clicking the TAG text-only below.
Comments
Droid it has been a pleasure to support you all these years. Your talents are terrific. A couple things I will go into. The story narrative said they fucked for days but it wasn't covered much at all. Would have been great to see. A slow visible induction is always best in my book. It just was too fast for me. Also, you gave Bella a smoking hot great body...which we never got to see totally nude per-transformation. That was a disappointment. I am happy that her full transformation will not be pretty much as a pile mud as she looks now. I hope you come up a really nice, sexy, exotic full transformation look. I know the story has a way to go so perhaps good things are still coming.
Randy-O
2019-03-02 19:54:37 +0000 UTCHi Randy, thank you for your feedback. Bella's transformation is not complete, as stated in a previous comment. The changes, both inside and outside of her body will be more evident. The transition from page 23 to 24 is obviating things that don't add much to the story. It is better the post images that are more exciting. I hope you feel different about the following sets. Thank you for supporting my work.
2019-03-02 17:00:58 +0000 UTCRandy-O Sadly the story does feel rushed. I don't get that. What is the rush to get to another story? Also unlike some other similar stories not excited about the end result of Bella's transformation. On page 19 it says the first part of her transformation is complete. I can only hope that the rough skin eventually breaks open and something better emerges. Sorry but being honest in saying this may end up being a story of what might have been more than anything else. That's too bad.
Randy-O
2019-03-02 15:28:51 +0000 UTC
