Chapter Additions, revisions & rewrites
Added 2024-12-29 17:42:32 +0000 UTCHey everyone, I'll be getting every chapter here with an index over the next two weeks, and doing some big revision on a few, today you will have noticed chapter 3 is where that started. No fundamental plot changes will happen unless I screwed something that I notice on a reread, mostly just fixing some of Dave's voice to fit the monologue style I got better at as it went on, and some of the bigger complaints about the knowledge he had in this chapter. I'd love to hear your thoughts.
