"You're riding this out with me."
Added 2023-08-19 16:00:08 +0000 UTCYesterday was a great writing day! Dialogue was flowing, their chemistry was electric. Roth gave me some awesome quotes! ๐ฅต๐ I had to do some research to fill in some plot things involving Rami and Ariana. ๐ฃ๐ฐ๐ซ Happy thatโs finally sorted!
โAre you listening to me?โ Her sharp tone was ruined by a hiccup. โIโm breaking our agreement. Sue me. I donโt fucking care. Iโm done!
โI hear you,โ he said as he sat on the couch and arranged her sideways on his lap.
โThen you have toโโ
He captured her chin before he growled, โIโve told you before, youโre in too fucking deep. Youโre riding this out with me.โ
**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confessions. Please do not share or distribute.
Something that jammed me up for a while was Roth was pressing so hard, that Jasmine reached this point. ๐That was never supposed to happen. I never anticipated in the whole book that she would ever throw in the towel like this, but Roth pushed so fucking hard that she snapped and I didn't know where to go from there. Roth revealed stuff that shouldn't have come out until book 4, when they had more time and understanding under their belt. But, of course, he had to rush it and ruin all my carefully laid plans. I tossed out maybe three different aftermaths. This is part of the fourth. My favorite and the only one that fits at the moment. I don't know if it was me that was in a good mood or Roth, but it all flowed beautifully today and I made a ton of progress! Yahoo.
Iโm going to be working on a ๐ scene. The OG patrons got a glimpse of that scene years ago and I suspect it needs a refresher. Have a great weekend everyone!! Iโm hoping I make it to the beach ๐๏ธ at some point.
Comments
What does ring ๐ scene mean?
Maddy
2023-08-25 22:09:36 +0000 UTCWhy am I picturing Jas drunk here with Roth caring for her and humoring her until she sobers up ๐ฅน Mia, Iโm crying
Denny
2023-08-21 00:09:49 +0000 UTC