Sneak peek

Thats a good idea! Once we implement more deeply pregnancy we may add a random chance of being pregnant by a beast (of course removed if the MC has no vag :P )

DuoDevelopers

I played through the character creation section and I really like the way you have it set up, particularly the backstory stuff. I think it might be interesting though, if, depending on your character's characteristics and the number of sex related backstory options you pick, if your character could start the game already pregnant or with a random assortment of children.

lovelesspoison

bugs in places like the UI, warehouse, or in general are fine, I mean you never know when its something relevant or a screw up, but yeah we will check all those texts and rewrite them so hopefully things about them are not a big deal :P

DuoDevelopers

Another small bug I found is when the courier tells you about the plague and the monsters attacking the castle - option B is listed twice. I'm sure you were gonna go through all of these again eventually, but I figured what the hell. Btw, if bugs aren't a priority this time around, just tell me and I'll keep my mouth shut.

Outdx

yeah I wrote it like in 10-15 minutes, since there is still a lot of stuff to code (dont really have much time to write or draw for the next 2 weeks probably) I will work on it, but I want to keep something like this to create the character

DuoDevelopers

So ignoring the grammar issues, I think the general flow of the story in the character creation could be better. Using the courier as an example, it sounds as if he shows up, having FINALLY found you and then nothing. But he'll still help you with grocery shopping and also your mom is missing. Now I know that's not the right order in which he said it, but that's how it sounded to me :/ On top of this it also sounds super generic. And ...as I'm writing this I'm starting to realize that you must be aware of this already O.o It's got to be a placeholder, surely? I mean compared to the otherwise terrific writing everywhere else in the game, this is unusually shoddy. But assuming it's not a placeholder - and in which case I know you're just trying to push through the character creation so we can get to the real game - I think I'd rather you use the old character creation model where the options aren't hidden behind a silly, oversimplified backstory.

Outdx

Yeah, I wasn't satisfied with that, although it says that he will take care of trade in the future and stuff but yeah I will probably rephrase the question

DuoDevelopers

More of a bug this one, but in the intro where you're creating your character, when the courier arrives to tell you your mother sent him to find you, the options you're given doesn't make sense. They seem to be about your skills at trading and intelligence etc.? I.e. "A) Cheaper prices for things that you find interesting or worthwhile."

Outdx

yeah the button is dissabled because I am fixing Helena in general and updating her scene so sorry for that :P I wasn't lying when I said there isn't much here haha

DuoDevelopers

Hey so I gave the UI sneak peek a try. It looks great. I like where it is going. But I couldn't interact with Helena when I clicked on her name and Lucina did not show up on the third day like she normally does.