The Calamitous Bob 3: Ex Machina
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EMU (EXPERIMENTAL MILITARY UNIT) just because it would be a funnily stupid name.
Matthew
2020-12-08 02:20:28 +0000 UTCCROW (Cthonic Radiant Orb Warframe) or (Cthonic Relentless Offensive Warframe)
JP Koenig
2020-12-04 18:54:48 +0000 UTCOkay last attempt to post my comments! I would suggest you name this bonus story 1: chapter 3. The way it currently is I'd I thought this was the literal 3rd story, not chapter 3. Chapter 1 is eh, okay.... but the story definitely improves in chapters 2 and 3! I like this story and would buy it. However I am already waiting impatiently for Journey. If you want to switch stories for a while I am good with it especially if you park Journey at a significant lull in the story. After Nariri has been dealt with... or 1865. I hope you continue to write Journey after Nariri has been dealt with.
StarWolf
2020-12-04 14:41:35 +0000 UTCAlso, wouldn't "F" be a closer sound to "V"?
Cadastral
2020-12-03 23:11:29 +0000 UTCFaithful event --> fateful event? Citizen redesigned as heir --> re-designated?
Cadastral
2020-12-03 23:10:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the thought exercise! Obviously, not all of them are serious. WARG (Warforge Animated Royal Golem) // SPARC (Special Powered Automaton: Raid Commander) // SARA (Specialized Assault Royal Automaton) // HAG (Harrak Assault Golem) // SASHA (Special Assault Striker Harrak Automata) // WEEB (War Engine Enlisted Breacher)
JP Koenig
2020-12-03 15:33:44 +0000 UTCWhat about WARDEN = Weaponized Automaton Royal Directive: Enemy Neutralizer? Alternatively, for a historical reference, MAHARAL = Mechanical (Or Modular) Automaton: Heavy Armour Relentless Assault Liason (or Launcher, but I think Relentless Assault Liason is funny)
Tarodan
2020-12-03 10:57:02 +0000 UTCI'm always partial to naming things Achmed the Snake.
Gibborim
2020-12-03 07:33:56 +0000 UTCIf you do continue to publish with PDFs and epubs available, please also publish as a normal post.
Gibborim
2020-12-03 07:32:38 +0000 UTCOr, more for the component words, as a name "SOLAIRE" : Series One Large Automated Imperial Retribution Entity Which would make "Sol" the appropriate nickname.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2020-12-03 06:52:23 +0000 UTCSERV--ANT
Andres Montemayor
2020-12-03 05:45:27 +0000 UTCSelf-driven Engineered Robot Version-- Armored Nodal Techoanimatron
Andres Montemayor
2020-12-03 05:45:13 +0000 UTCWork in progress, but if SOLFIS stays Canon, then Sophisticated Organic Lifeforms Fortifying Intelligent System. Otherwise : ICARUS (Incredibly Complex Automated Reconnaissance Utility System)
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2020-12-03 05:37:13 +0000 UTCHow precious, thank you ♥️
Lowe K. Lyesmith
2020-12-03 05:20:09 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2020-12-03 04:58:58 +0000 UTCTrue Edifice of Automated Reduction. It sounds snobbish enough to be both imperial and intimidating.
Malir Blackspear
2020-12-03 04:48:38 +0000 UTCQuestion (careful, spoiler): What should Solfis really be named? Choose an acronym like Harrak Armored Retribution Mechanimatron, which gives HARM and Harm would be the name of the golem. You get the idea. If I like a suggestion enough, it will become cannon.
Mecanimus
2020-12-03 04:12:06 +0000 UTC
