The Calamitous Bob 36: A Matter of Taste
Added 2021-03-09 02:34:21 +0000 UTCComments
Some quick edits: Varska’s apartments on the fourth floor where off limit. -> were off limits. “You sutptised me, stole a kiss, -> stupitised(?)(stupefied/surprised) Varska had brought a couch up into a greenhouse -> into the greenhouse The outlander caressed Varska’s shock of dark curls slowly -> locks of dark curls(?) “I think I’ve heard about Halluria before. Form Farren. -> From Farren. It happens from times to times. -> (isn't the phrase "time to time"?) lasers that cut through stone and use them as whip. -> as a whip. Beginner 4 - Beginner 9 -> (For the others, you only included the number if the rank stayed the same) Viv had never brooches the subject, of course -> broached Lastly, the church is one of their crops’ main purchaser -> purchasers
Nicholas Paterson
2021-08-13 03:44:13 +0000 UTC"the term venomous is applied to organisms that bite (or sting) to inject their toxins, whereas the term poisonous applies to organisms that unload toxins when you eat them." -Google. So I guess either could be correct depending on how it kills.
Nicholas Paterson
2021-08-12 23:12:05 +0000 UTCis that really right? folks get so anal about misuse of poisonous/venomous (pretty simple, rly), but a plant? that has no actual venom, doesn't bite you, etc...source?
fbt
2021-07-29 01:58:14 +0000 UTCA plant that kills you through chemicals when you touch it is venomous, not poisonous.
Sebastian Lachs
2021-06-27 18:35:58 +0000 UTCGood because I'm bad at romance lol.
Mecanimus
2021-03-09 13:50:06 +0000 UTCI'm glad to see Viv settling in so well and establishing a bit of normalcy. I also appreciate that the relationship between her and Varska exists, but that you aren't focusing too heavily on it.
Jon
2021-03-09 10:42:03 +0000 UTCHmm?
Mecanimus
2021-03-09 09:55:17 +0000 UTCHmm
Railsrains
2021-03-09 05:14:37 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2021-03-09 02:47:02 +0000 UTC
