The Calamitous Bob 39: Back
Added 2021-03-26 04:08:49 +0000 UTCComments
FeelsSadMan. Hope they can fix their relationship.
Falxie
2021-08-15 15:40:55 +0000 UTCSome quick edits: She was in good hands -> (needs an extra space) Viv headed straight to the spotted feather -> Spotted Feather to cross that line from someone from another world, -> that line with someone(?) when you were dragged in our world -> into our “You assume that you know what i want.” -> what I want."
Nicholas Paterson
2021-08-13 06:59:04 +0000 UTCYeah sry I already saw that. I'll probably reupload the chapter with all corrections implemented.
Mecanimus
2021-03-26 14:22:29 +0000 UTCThanks, Wording is a bit awkward in "You have been in this word for all of two months, and I have been here for close to twenty." does she mean 20 years?
Scyfe
2021-03-26 13:55:08 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2021-03-26 04:33:52 +0000 UTC
