[Salvos] 95. Faith (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-03-13 15:22:25 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
The guild war plot is really weak. It kind of feels like something that you didn’t have a solid idea on how to write, so everyone is just bumbling like a bunch of fools in order to hit the plot points that you wanted instead of organically escalating.
Elayda
2021-03-27 04:22:10 +0000 UTCOnly an idiot would join the war instigated by shady nobles.
ShotoGun
2021-03-14 04:49:21 +0000 UTCYeah. . . If the Inori Empire or whatever is really working with demons, it's going to be a great opportunity for the bigger adventuring companies. All he would do would be to extend the war. Maybe to the point of Elutra being in position to oppress Inori's people. Even on the off-chance Faith speaks the truth Daniel need do nothing at all and both nations will fall while he sits back sipping mar. . . fighting Salvos's fights. And a big bad archdemon. That last is probably his real reasoning.
Venalitor
2021-03-14 04:15:19 +0000 UTC"The reward show{ed} here" - "shown". Additionally, "sure one of them {would} be around" - "should"
J
2021-03-13 19:45:29 +0000 UTCOoh I really like where this is headed. I’m guessing that volume 2 wraps up with the company war, and volume 3 sees Daniel and Salvos getting dragged into Faiths war? Maybe via the arch demon connection? Things are really heating up!
Kevin Caffrey
2021-03-13 18:33:17 +0000 UTC<3
MelasD
2021-03-13 17:57:57 +0000 UTCThey burned down a mostly empty building and killed a bunch of Silvers with a few Golds. For each attack, they’ve also lost dozens of Gold and dozens of Silvers despite having the element of surprise.
MelasD
2021-03-13 17:57:45 +0000 UTCBefore war was declared, the Iron Champions burned down the dreamers headquarters, killed a bunch of people at the training grounds, and poisoned the founder. Those sound like war winning actions, why would they dick around with the declaring war brinkmanship if they could just kill the dreamers?
Gardor
2021-03-13 17:40:34 +0000 UTCVery good chapter, ty.
ParoxysmDK
2021-03-13 16:20:48 +0000 UTCI agree. Salvos had the right mindset. If Daniel says she’s bad she’s bad.
Lictor Magnus
2021-03-13 16:03:03 +0000 UTCI am having mixed feeling about this princess, she does not seem to lie about running away to search for Daniel, but on the other hand for Daniel to be that distrustful it must means that she is not someone who can be trusted
Mythix
2021-03-13 16:01:59 +0000 UTCgah, forgot to mention TWF. please remember to vote! http://topwebfiction.com/listings/salvos/
MelasD
2021-03-13 15:35:12 +0000 UTC
