[Salvos] 172. Cosmic Compression (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-07-28 02:42:37 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
Thanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2021-09-21 10:57:13 +0000 UTCwill fix, thanks
MelasD
2021-07-28 10:55:41 +0000 UTCWell that's a pretty ominous cliffhanger. Overall I thought the chapter came together really well. Little grammar mistake, Salvos is picking up and throwing multiple balls: "I picked up two at a time, running off and throwing it into the sky. The [Locust Vurats] that went chasing after it never came back." --> "I picked up two at a time, running off and throwing them into the sky. The [Locust Vurats] that went chasing after them never came back."
Robert
2021-07-28 05:18:45 +0000 UTCEither the Demon is coming back, or Lily finally managed to communicate with her people. They are going to rescue her and/or they want to kill Salvos for having that class. And ... First?
Jonathan
2021-07-28 03:02:22 +0000 UTC
