[Tian] 1:26 (Removed for KU)
Added 2021-06-14 02:34:56 +0000 UTCRemoved for KU
Author's Note:
Almost 3,000 words. Who saw the ending coming? Also RIP Websmith.
Comments
I think the thing she was lacking was that she didn't have a true goal of her own; she was just carrying her mother's metaphorical flag. She adopted her mother's goal, and her mother's reason for that goal, but that doesn't mean that, in her deepest of hearts/soul, that's truly what she wanted above all else.
Benjamin Mages
2021-06-14 18:37:41 +0000 UTCAh yes, fair weather friends. Or perhaps that isn't quite the right word, but if not that, then conditional friends.
Benjamin Mages
2021-06-14 18:36:28 +0000 UTCI had been starting to wonder if her being there was actually the final test to fill the thing she was 'lacking' for her to finally be immortal? Her unfolding backstory is one of pain and loneliness.... maybe she was deemed too selfish and focused on herself to become immortal, despite her obvious skill. Love the way it's unfolding!
Elle
2021-06-14 14:42:54 +0000 UTCI hope Tian stomps a bloody mudhole in Galom's ass once she finds his original body.
Melting Sky
2021-06-14 05:32:30 +0000 UTCDidn't see that coming.
luda305
2021-06-14 03:25:29 +0000 UTC
