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[Salvos] 151. The Next Step (Removed for KU)

(Removed for KU)

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Your leap to "having a baby" was more than just weird, but you're right with the rest. This development doesn't really seem to be an evolution. Her becoming fully mortal at some point wouldn't make any blasted sense, though, since SHE IS A DEMON.

Lowe K. Lyesmith

so the benefit is stats she didn't need since she literally just slaughtered a dude who was a rank up on her in her previous mortal form vs now she is vulnerable while sleeping more often? seems dumb....plus what if she had actually needed that skill the first time for an emergency situation...she passes out and is killed.. the end of the story. I mean I get it as a gag but from a skill standpoint that is just terrible starting out with a sleep deficit...does she have to catch up on the thousands of hours she hasn't slept is that the next gag...or does she waste away because she hasn't eaten while she is passed out from never sleeping....or do we wait for the instadeath by starvation for when she gets her next rank up and full mortal form. When she gets preggo in full mortal form after miraculously living through starvation and then changes to demon form what happens to the baby? On the upside, once she is in demon form she probably won't lose any sleep over it...

Nick Tinsley

Salvos's moping and subsequent excitement about the loss and rediscovery of her monstrous form filled me with a frenetic glee. I do wonder what the benefit of being a daeva cambion is if it's really just a timed buff though. So far, the changeling's abilities seem to have been a much bigger step. Not sure what to make of the ending.

Venalitor

Thanks for the chapter. It will drive her nuts if she has to sleep and eat now.

Joshua Little

im going apartment seeing on saturday :p

MelasD

It's one thing if you gotta make a deadline, but it sounds like you need to take a short break from all this writing now that it's done. Go spend a day going somewhere cool or have a bbq or something.

Melting Sky

Hopefully she only needs to sleep when in full human form. It would make sense as a better mortal form, truly experiencing a mortal body when she wants

Simon Casey

I think the benefits are the increased stats in that form and being able to blend in better in general. She used items before to disguise herself but I bet she shows up as a mage without them now when she's in that form.

Lictor Magnus

310k words is uhh wow.

luda305

Salvos vs. sleep. The battle of a lifetime.

Katherine

Oh my god she's sleeping! She's gonna be DAEVASTATED when she wakes up.

Tarodan

Oof its looking like Salvos has been nerfed, I can't imagine what benefits partial mortality is bringing that balances out loosing like 30 percent of your life.

Dominic French


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