[Salvos] 318. Time for a Talk (Removed for KU)
Added 2022-03-11 22:25:06 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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Thanks!
David Johnson
2022-03-29 05:20:46 +0000 UTCFixed!
MelasD
2022-03-29 05:20:13 +0000 UTC316 and 317 appear to be missing from the $3 tier.
David Johnson
2022-03-29 05:18:17 +0000 UTCChapters like this should be nostalgic, swift, funny n to the point. Great job👍 especially loved centina trying to woo headmaster clayton🤣🤣🤣 if I was offered an entire filler chapter of their awkward back n forth I would be satisfied. To be a flaw of a wall on their first date😌
mightguyishot
2022-03-13 14:27:17 +0000 UTCI liked the pacing. Was going through things quite fast, but I don't think it would have felt better to be stuck reading about people being gathered for a week, and the pace makes sense within the narrative because salvos is salvos.
Chris Lewis
2022-03-12 16:54:37 +0000 UTCKinda feels like someone skipping through cutscenes as soon as there able in a video game to get to the game play, this was mostly just gathering ppl so I'd rather it done quickly but it's also still just an entire chapter of gathering people.... but other people found this funny, so I guess it was fine? I kinda grew up with south park and other adult swim shows so my humor is kinda, hm.... crackheady? Extreme? A little dark? So I didn't find this as funny as others but I guess that's a me thing. I mean, I have smiled at lighter forms of comedy but, this wasn't it for me. I would have preferred just a short time skip of salvos coming back dragging a buncha confused, unwilling participants
R3IsL
2022-03-12 14:57:17 +0000 UTCTime to pick up Edithe and her all star adventures from the companies and Saffron and the rest of the vampires and that Druid guard and kill Belzu. Does Salvos get an evolution with her Nexeus Mystic class at level 100 or a 2nd class?
2022-03-12 10:16:35 +0000 UTCAh I really cant wait until the "I got adopted" line and Daniel's reaction.
Eric
2022-03-12 07:57:29 +0000 UTCPoor Veronica is the only one left out :D
Ivactheseeker
2022-03-12 07:31:17 +0000 UTCI totally forgot about them! Maybe they're just not participating in the meeting since Hope was so traumatized?
Sanja-G
2022-03-12 07:28:12 +0000 UTCThe pacing fells quite quick to me. But since Salvos is hurrying everything actively along it makes sense and the parts where she is absent contrast nicely.
Sanja-G
2022-03-12 07:26:20 +0000 UTCAgreed
Ivactheseeker
2022-03-12 07:21:01 +0000 UTCIt's over clayton, centina has her claws in you.
Yeno Memevig
2022-03-12 06:31:12 +0000 UTCThe pacing is a bit fast, but very Salvos. This is a very Salvos way to do things.
Veronica Francesca Davis
2022-03-12 04:51:48 +0000 UTCMooooore
Tanner Porter
2022-03-12 04:45:38 +0000 UTCIt's like if the Justice League were led by Deadpool. Chaotic good figure from another universe.
luda305
2022-03-12 04:00:01 +0000 UTCSalvos isn't a Demon, she's Salvos.
Archaon
2022-03-12 02:41:05 +0000 UTCWasn't there another prince and princess with the rebellion? Princess Hope and Prince... something-or-other? What happened to them?
Matt.Silver
2022-03-12 02:20:44 +0000 UTCNot going to lie, this chapter was a lot of fun to read.
Kitty Chan
2022-03-12 01:12:48 +0000 UTCI'm digging it
Benjamin Lipken
2022-03-11 23:56:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2022-03-11 23:38:57 +0000 UTCGood pacing and a fun chapter!
Viedu
2022-03-11 23:38:00 +0000 UTCthe pacing was good on this! it was fast, but i think it was appropriate as we're reaching the climax and it's sort of like all the pieces falling into place. I definitely wouldn't want to breeze through defeating Belzu like this since that's what we've been building up to for so long - I want to savor it. but I liked it for getting us to this next good part. thanks for the chapter! excited to see how it all unfolds!
Elle
2022-03-11 23:37:22 +0000 UTCThe pacing is good
Rd Zg
2022-03-11 23:08:06 +0000 UTCWho ever said there had to be one [Hero]? Anyways, Salvos is in a [Hero]ic duo with Daniel, except he is actually the [Sidekick].
Bunny Waffles
2022-03-11 22:54:00 +0000 UTCAvengers assemble…around Salvos!
Tyler smalley
2022-03-11 22:52:38 +0000 UTCThe pacing is excellent for salvos on seriousness
Bri
2022-03-11 22:46:21 +0000 UTCDude I am laughing so much. Salvos just pulled people and was real casual about solving their problem. Poor Valda she will probably learn next chapter that Daniel is the [Hero] but it will be fine since Salvos will most likely say that he can't win against her.
Lon
2022-03-11 22:43:21 +0000 UTCThank for the chapter. The end of this chapter make Salvos look serious........... BUT, we know that Salvos CAN'T be SERIOUS....
Azgaroth
2022-03-11 22:43:05 +0000 UTCThe pacing was nice.
Lon
2022-03-11 22:42:09 +0000 UTCHa I like the Clayton and Centia interactions
Shelbo
2022-03-11 22:39:01 +0000 UTCGreat as always!
Khaled
2022-03-11 22:37:58 +0000 UTCIs salvos going to reveal she is a Demon to the public anytime soon ?
ZelTheUnbroken
2022-03-11 22:37:51 +0000 UTCI like
Dolus
2022-03-11 22:36:47 +0000 UTC12s
Captdeth
2022-03-11 22:25:25 +0000 UTC