[Thera] 1.03 (Removed for KU)
Added 2022-06-08 05:56:52 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
Was a nice chapter. I like the part of the two big creatures fighting and the Jellyfish almost hading Thera as a snack.
Lon
2022-06-09 19:51:01 +0000 UTCThera used Defense Curl!
uavgas
2022-06-08 17:07:57 +0000 UTCThera Thera Thera. Ya
Captdeth
2022-06-08 16:48:01 +0000 UTCGreat, only one small nitpick, a turtle curling up into a ball? Maybe come up with a better phrase?
Vector
2022-06-08 07:59:43 +0000 UTC8/10 chapter, nothing tremendously exciting, but informative, engaging, and it gives good context for why she'd be drawn to the dungeon and why she'd eventually choose to stay there for a while.
David Brims
2022-06-08 07:27:12 +0000 UTCoverall great quality, nothing to complain about aside length, but thats always a problem no matter how much you put into a chapter imo. 10/11
Cold_Fischl
2022-06-08 06:13:57 +0000 UTCHow well would you rate chappie
MelasD
2022-06-08 06:07:06 +0000 UTCThis is a good chapter. To have us learn about the dungeon both through the main character’s experience and simultaneously have us know more than them by using the school approach is a great use of perspective. Well done.
Cold_Fischl
2022-06-08 06:02:09 +0000 UTC
