[Amelia] The Level Zero Hero Chapter 30 (Removed for KU)
Added 2022-12-13 15:22:41 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
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I just don’t think she’d kick someone when they’re down.
Sunshine
2022-12-31 20:08:52 +0000 UTCI cracked up at the image of her holding him like a baby. 😂 I like that you created situations where it appears that her abilities could be a weakness, then immediately subverted it to comedic effect. Then you topped it off with the mental image of her cradling a hero like a baby. Very fun! The only thing I saw was one line jumped out a bit as jarring within the rest of the chapter. It seems overly harsh. ““So you don’t know shit,” I said dryly.”
Sunshine
2022-12-28 13:19:37 +0000 UTC
