[Salvos] 637. Reconciliation (Removed for KU)
Added 2023-10-22 10:11:04 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
Kacey's emotional state and redemption would also have more impact if we had seen a bit of her struggle and despair at Taritos.
Dragonmaster_42
2023-10-24 14:25:04 +0000 UTCI like the character development with Kacey. Maybe she'll turn out to be a decent person in the end
Roombot
2023-10-22 15:59:01 +0000 UTC3hr
Captdeth
2023-10-22 13:21:20 +0000 UTCI have a few issues with this chapter: (1) Ivonne's non-answers. If she doesn't want to reveal everything, fine, but (assuming they go to the Salvos clone) say something like "We'll meet your friend" (Daniel can still not know about it); (2) Nearly no progress; (3) no Salvos; I wouldn't mind one or two of them, but the combination of all three of them with the other slow chapters lately is a bit unsatisfying... On the other hand I love the Salvos story and since we will get some amazing chapters soon (given all the buildup), I trust you, MelasD, that this is what you need to write to realize and reinvigorate your creative vision.
Dragonmaster_42
2023-10-22 12:15:57 +0000 UTCThe moment with Kacey was quite nice. It added a lot of depth to her. Also, can't wait for Daniel to finally advance his class.
Azrie
2023-10-22 10:24:09 +0000 UTC
