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[Salvos] 619. Searching... (Removed for KU)

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Thats the most Willy „Oh.“ chapter ending ever, I love it

Melone

Should it be "the least"? "However, the story which Rachel believed the most was how every night at the stroke of midnight the ghost of a baby Wyvern would appear at the fringes of the Central Square,"

Sancturillore -- Élie Simard-Wallot

Feedback observation: Rachel goes through a few reasons why the rumors of wyverns are real in her internal monologue, but when talking to other people does not mention any of those reasons. Just makes a very dubious assertion and begs "please believe me!" Salvos is the one that makes crazy statements and acts on them. Rachel has struck me as being a tad more methodical. Be interesting to see some actual debate in this chapter.

Matt Cannon

RIP Willy xD

Cha0sniper

Thanks for the chapter!

Wensber

Yes! Go get’em Rachel.

Kristeen Livesay

Nice chapter. Was missing Rachel a lot, can't wait for her to meet Oriur, though I doubt it will be easy.

Azrie

23s

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