[Kara] Chapter 10: Restful Sleep (Removed for KU)
Added 2024-02-05 15:07:20 +0000 UTC(Removed for KU)
Comments
I think the period before the "And" should be a comma, and you should drop the second comma, like this: Kara learned more about Arjin as they made their way to the inn, and it was an inn the prostitute stayed at.
Atsuke
2024-02-15 11:06:48 +0000 UTCThis sentence feels hard to read, at least in my opinion: Kara learned more about Arjin as they made their way to the inn. And it was an inn, the prostitute stayed at. (It is just after the second page break thing)
Atsuke
2024-02-15 10:50:56 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Jonathan Willis
2024-02-13 13:38:01 +0000 UTC> And Arjin nodded. “Perhaps I could convince my innkeeper to offer you a room for a few nights…” In the end, she didn't do any convincing 😔. Smithkeeper is also the most based title I've ever heard of, W Dammir
Azrie
2024-02-05 15:17:18 +0000 UTC37s
Captdeth
2024-02-05 15:08:14 +0000 UTC
