Early Bird: Monstrous Ranch, Ch. 10
Added 2017-09-14 07:50:26 +0000 UTCIn which the second act begins, Senya awakens with a few glitches in his memory and a few puppies on his cock, there is no syrup for his pancakes, he gets to know Valina—and Kitten—a little better, and he encounters two ominous fey in the cellar: A sprite in a bottle, and, let's say, a woman of wealth and taste. Won't you guess her name? Just kidding; you will call her Miss Scarlet.
This chapter was tough for me to edit. Is it long enough? Totally. Is it sexy enough? Well, it is to me, but it might not fully satisfy some. Senya doesn't achieve many climaxes in this chapter—it's more about setting up a very special couple of erotic scenes in the next chapter. It's really a big tease.
If you have any thoughts, please do let me know, because I welcome critique on this particular entry!
Also, to my $3 patrons, please do get me your Bonus Pairings requests soon! Time is of the essence, and I'd like to get the poll up by the 20th!
Comments
I love the chapter, but I do feel it ends a bit abruptly. That might just be my desire for more exposition speaking, though.
acroPhobia
2017-09-15 16:35:17 +0000 UTCAnother great story. Thank you! Looking forward to 11. Pm'ing comments to avoid spoilers.
Betterfornow
2017-09-14 14:50:41 +0000 UTC
