Early Bird: Honeydew Heist, Ch. 02
Added 2020-07-15 16:00:00 +0000 UTCIn which Nevyn encounters the dryad and begins flirting with her, and with a puff of nurselily pollen, she begins to fall under his sway—only for Nevyn to encounter a rather bouncy spanner in the works.
Enter the delightshade! Delightshades are hard for me, because they don't actually have any personality of their own, really—they're almost mindless, and I actually decided to ease back from the original implication that they were totally mindless, because that just didn't make a good story.
In the next chapter, things slide much more firmly into pure, unadulterated femdom, I promise! :P
Comments
Oh, I *do* love girls being broken by their own sensitive titties.
Wild Bill
2020-08-01 01:44:26 +0000 UTCMayyybe a little one. It's... well, let's just say it's about Nevyn's employment history.
Pangolin
2020-07-16 20:30:33 +0000 UTCOh? Do we have theories? ^^
Lorelei
2020-07-16 17:53:30 +0000 UTCI like Nevyn. He seems fun, a well-rounded, vaguely principled and somewhat sympathetic scoundrel - by Lacratian standards, of course! Don't even mind the soft maledom, though I can't wait to see him end up in all kinds of trouble! (Also, and getting a bit spoilery here but I'll keep it vague: reading the first chapter I thought his outlook seemed pretty similar to a certain other character in many ways... but I still wasn’t expecting the reveal in this chapter! Well, maybe it wasn't <i>literally</i> a reveal yet, but the hints did get pretty blatant. :D Great stuff!)
Pangolin
2020-07-15 22:41:01 +0000 UTC
