Under Her Sway, Ch. 02
Added 2020-12-11 01:35:24 +0000 UTCIn which Limini gets another chance at turning the tables on Tess... but gets a little caught up in her own tentacle spell.
Sometimes, over-preparation doesn't pay off.
This was a fun commission, and I'm actually surprised how how a character like Limini comes across in these stories versus how I find myself thinking about her. She's going to be a lot more important than you might think, and if there's anything I've come to realize over the last month, it's that I'm really excited to get back to the "main storyline".
Until then, Limini will remain fodder for these demons, and I'm sure she doesn't mind. She'd need to have a mind intact to mind, after all. ;)
I'm trying something new now—moving away from a "queue" system and towards a "revolving door" system. Instead of telling myself, "I'm not allowed to work on Bonus Pairings or storylines or flashfics or Whatever I Want until the commissions are all done", I'm trying to let myself go back and forth more. That means that tomorrow I'm probably gonna spend some time on an Alrek/Larya story or the like. I miss those kids.
I love commissions, but I really want to be able to enjoy commissions again, and that means not letting them own my schedule. I just end up not writing at all and being overwhelmed with guilt.
To be clear, I'm okay!
No, really. I'm actually better than I've been in months. My new living situation has been a difficult transition, especially learning to balance homemaking with breadwinning, and lockdown and the election and the fires and having to drop out of college and losing access to therapy didn't make any of it easier. But I am blessed with a lot of patient readers and loyal friends and a supportive community. I'm working on the therapy thing, too. This is my favorite time of year, and that helps, too.
Oh, also, I'm working on editing an upcoming flashfic and another commissioned story (this one the second chapter of the Fleece Sprites of the Deep Evergreen trilogy). I'm not sure when they'll be posted, but probably within the next couple weeks!
Oh, and I really want to write a holly-days themed story this year. We'll see. Fingers crossed.
Comments
This was a great story. I never expected what happened to happen. Great job
Joe Lorkowski
2021-04-18 20:58:53 +0000 UTCThis reminds me of the commission I made with The Smothering End of the Bimbo Ballet... did I inadvertently inspire this commission? A good read indeed. Cheers to whoever commissioned this!
Anon
2020-12-29 14:25:24 +0000 UTCOh man, wonderful read! Always glad to see more of Tess!
Matthew
2020-12-16 15:37:54 +0000 UTCOops, thanks! Fixed it on the Literotica upload. :)
Lorelei
2020-12-14 19:11:14 +0000 UTCI really love succubi *and* tentacles, so this is really great. One thing, at one point it says 'Tess could barely nod', I think that should be Limini.
Wild Bill
2020-12-14 17:21:38 +0000 UTCAnother wonderful read!
Zanni
2020-12-11 11:11:41 +0000 UTCOh boy, it's Chapter 2! What a great day!
hellenberg
2020-12-11 07:14:52 +0000 UTC