Early Bird: The Love Leech, Ch. 03
Added 2019-10-19 17:11:56 +0000 UTCIn which a pair of lovely cocksucking sluts attend to their sweet, handsome Master, and he shows the new arrival just how nice and obedient his cock can make her. And the bimbos decide to show him just how sweet and obedient his cock can make him. He's in full control at last. Isn't he?
And the conclusion to the story has arrived! I'm feeling better now, and trying to get back into the swing of writing. More is on the way!
Comments
Great work, as always! In the third chapter, there are at three bits that I especially like: The Belli POV part shows that Lynni didn't do anything to undo her conversion, she’s simply twisted it to her advantage. The idea that a love leech can only speak to those it has already enthralled works great as a milestone in the story to show Garin's fall. The ending with the ultimate motivation of the leech and why she chose Garin shows her motivations as one of the Dead beautifully. It’s not about ”sabotaging the group of evil humans”. It’s just about having a supply of sweet things to attach her lips to and suck forever and ever.
Pangolin
2019-10-19 22:56:08 +0000 UTCAwe, thank you! Hope you like chapter 6 and the exclusive CYOA I’m working on ☺️
Yshomatsu
2019-10-19 18:23:24 +0000 UTCAaaaaaand now I’m your patron too
Jaegermeister
2019-10-19 18:21:30 +0000 UTC5 is out on Literotica already, 6 is available to my patrons, but I’ll be submitting it after the weekend 😊
Yshomatsu
2019-10-19 18:09:25 +0000 UTCThe perfect follow up would be corrupted forest 5! :)
Jaegermeister
2019-10-19 18:04:00 +0000 UTClol I was just thinking to myself, should i keep watching youtube or go to bed. WELL perfect timing, I'm going to bed so i can read =P
Yshomatsu
2019-10-19 17:13:08 +0000 UTC
