Dialogue Update: Narration and Other Edits (Pages 7-12 & 28)
Added 2021-08-04 20:50:10 +0000 UTCHi hi!
Got another storyline/dialogue update for ya to feast your eyes on:
Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.
The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 1. I wanted to highlight the introduction of the "Narration" part of the story that will be on some pages going forward.
The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:
- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue bubbles & speech bubble positioning
- Added 4th wall narration text on Pages 7, 11, 12, & 28.
- Added Norman's narration bubbles on pages 8 & 9/
Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful hump day 🐪
-J
© James Schleisman February-March 2019 All Rights Reserved.
Comments
Not until I have finished the first print volume
Jamie Schleisman
2021-08-05 19:02:43 +0000 UTCYes
Jamie Schleisman
2021-08-05 19:00:35 +0000 UTCWait so we have two levels of narration- one a quasi voiceover and one that is Norman’s thoughts to himself? Also NORMAN’S BUTT.
Allan Meyer
2021-08-05 07:13:51 +0000 UTCdo you know when you will continue with the main story?
jericho
2021-08-05 03:23:04 +0000 UTC
