The Experiment Ep 02
Added 2023-01-19 21:16:40 +0000 UTCWe're still in the shrinking phase of the story, lots of handheld here. One more episode until the scale gets bigger ;)
The writing is still below the standard I want but is closer. Right now I'm being lazy and using adverbs and tropes while I work out the nuts and bolts of VR storytelling.
Let me know if there's anything you especially like or dislike with the writing, I'm always open to feedback!
