5 Stars Out of 5 (Exclusive Song From Studio Course)
Added 2023-04-30 03:26:20 +0000 UTCHey gang,
First off - this song can't be shared anywhere outside of here, but I know yall get that :)
Here's the song I made in the course that's going to release in a month or so. In it I'll share everything I did in real time to get there. Exciting!
Gonna get this mixed/mastered and eventually release it everywhere, but for the forseeable future it's exclusive for you guys!
Lyrics:
Verse:
My fingers dancing on your skin
Completely intertwined
I never thought I'd trust again
Betrayed so many times
I hear you in the other room
You're humming to yourself
The bed still smells of your perfume
And I log onto yelp
Chorus:
It's been four months since I got it
And if I am to be honest
I was unsure at first
Thought that it wouldn't work
Thought that I might get hurt
Some safety features are missing
And sometimes it doesn't listen
but it's a sleek design
Glad I made it mine
Five stars out of five
Bridge:
I was surprised
it looked better than the pictures
It makes me laugh
built in entertainment system
It synced with me
Effortlessly
Out of the box
Sadly they're out of stock
Or else I'd order lots, yeah
Chorus:
it's 40 years since I got it
And if I am to be honest
I was unsure at first
Thought that it wouldn't work
Thought that I might get hurt
And hurt I was, cause I'm crying
But all our lives, we were thriving
Farewell for now, my wife
the love of my life
Five stars out of five
Comments
I love it
Teagan Ostrow44
2023-07-03 03:15:57 +0000 UTCWow
Teagan Ostrow44
2023-07-03 02:44:25 +0000 UTClike everythings you do I love it and for real I love your voice so amazing ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
Karmas05
2023-05-07 03:58:12 +0000 UTCJoel, can't get enough of this start my day, end my day with this๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐ you are sooooo amazing!!!!
Gayle
2023-05-05 15:12:54 +0000 UTCYour voice is amazing, the song too of course!
Brandt
2023-05-02 19:31:08 +0000 UTCIdk why it took me another listen to need to come back and say it, but that was a very nice touch at the end. ๐๐๐ Also...Surely, unintentional discreet humming in the grocery store doesn't count as violation of Pat terms? ๐ฌ asking for a friend...lol
Dannielle O'Neill
2023-05-01 02:12:17 +0000 UTCDuuuuuuude, I listened without reading the lyrics beforehand. I was vibing until I got hit right in the feels with the 2nd chorus. Nicely done - I really like the โfull circleโ type lyrics in songs (for lack of better description)
Aleece
2023-04-30 18:23:12 +0000 UTCI love that the chorus feels big, different from the other parts and hits. I can't wait to listen it other than here.
Kinga Konyecsik
2023-04-30 17:50:53 +0000 UTCYeah I have one video already done! Just need to film a meech shoutout
Joel Berghult
2023-04-30 16:20:24 +0000 UTCHonestly the concept rubbed me wrong firstly when I saw the lenses and I was a bit disappointed thenโฆBut! I was mistaken! I really like the whole song and imho youโve mastered the lyrics ๐๐ผ Theyโre simple on one hand but have such a nice deep meaning on the other, and thatโs exactly what I love! Thank you, Joel, for writing this song and sharing it with us ๐ซถ๐ผ P.S. Life reminds me again that I shouldnโt judge the book by its cover.
Helga ๐ฆ
2023-04-30 15:06:26 +0000 UTCOh wow Babes, that is a vibe! Jag รคlskar det! Tack sรฅ mycket!
BellatrixBerghult
2023-04-30 13:48:13 +0000 UTCAwesome, as usually your songs. Great vibe - partly funny /romantic / nostalgic โค๏ธ
Franceska
2023-04-30 11:48:27 +0000 UTCI still believe you are talking about the love of your life, your only wife, your synthesizer! She hums to herself (especially in demo mode) She has soft skin (especially if custom wrapped) She leaves the smell of perfume in your bed (stop excessively rubbing it on your sheets!) Lol ๐คฃ I do like the vibe, 5 stars out of 5 is a mouthful so well done singing that without it becoming a mumble! It's interesting how you've created chapters in the song (beginning, middle, end) and with that different flows for the story telling. If this is indicative of the course material, you are going to be a busy boy, well done ๐ x
Clair (Teampanda)
2023-04-30 09:44:26 +0000 UTCThanks for sharing your song with us. Now that you seem to have finished up most of the stuff you need for the course can we expect you filming and releasing some videos on your channel? I know you said last time you were talking about this that you will have mixed content coming out, both songwriting and reaction videos. Iโm curious if you have a plan, on upload frequency or anything like that
Adina
2023-04-30 09:41:51 +0000 UTCOk I haven't listened yet and some peeps are saying it has a sad ending.. I read the lyrics and my first thought was you talking about your first drumkit or synth ๐คฃ๐คฃ Now I'm going to listen to it and comment how wrong I was!
Clair (Teampanda)
2023-04-30 09:26:17 +0000 UTCI read the lyrics before listening to the song and got some tears in my eyes when I got to the end of them (must be some eyelash or other crap) ๐ ๐ฅฒ๐ฅน There's many little things in the song and in your voice, that I like a lot, but since I suck at the terms, I'll just say that I love it ๐ถ๐ฅฐ Your vocals are ๐ฅ, lyrics are cool/touching and that build up is awesome. Well done Joel, 5/5 ๐คฉ Thanks for letting us listen to it here!
JustSomeJK
2023-04-30 09:00:16 +0000 UTCDude, it's a beautiful day outside, I just woke up and saw this and plopped this on while wakinandbakin ๐ was vibing cause it's a bob ๐๐ but what the hell did you do that 'james Arthur - say you won't let go'- switcheroo at the end for???? ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ Now I'm baked and sad ๐ญ๐ญ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ But honestly though, this is a winner imho ๐๐๐๐
Nataliekey
2023-04-30 08:22:21 +0000 UTCOK, that's awesome! โค๏ธโ๐ฅ
Magdalena Slodczyk
2023-04-30 08:02:18 +0000 UTCWowwww I love this one! Canโt wait to put this STRAIGHT in my playlist ๐The frickin chorus is gonna be in my head all day noww haha โค๏ธ
Rainbowz Grace
2023-04-30 07:38:56 +0000 UTCWow, that's great. ๐๐๐
Magalie Leplus
2023-04-30 07:23:45 +0000 UTCLove the song! I've only listened to it once so far, but it's already stuck in my head like crazy! Your voice sounds amazing! In the past when you wanted more power sometimes you would sound like you pushed it out a bit too much, but this sounds so much more relaxed. Great job! ๐ช
Marioni
2023-04-30 07:14:47 +0000 UTC๐ nice
Ilyantsh Zahrah
2023-04-30 07:03:08 +0000 UTCYes, yes, YES! Just listened (I read through the lyrics first) and I looooove it. Your voice is on fire and the concept is great, it's a tricky one- it could have gone either way but you nailed it! Obviously. You should be proud ๐๐ผ ~The only thing FOR ME (because I feel like an ogre for saying anything even remotely negative and don't want to be attacked, lol!) is the jump from 3 months to 40 years is quite an escalation...I definitely feel like you could have some fun with another verse with some mid-relationship goings on... But that said, I'm no expert and what you have done is ๐๐ผchef's kiss~ Peace out โฎ๏ธ
Hayley
2023-04-30 06:51:59 +0000 UTCWowza
Calize
2023-04-30 06:35:16 +0000 UTCOK, the first line has me excited already ๐ซ
Hayley
2023-04-30 06:34:34 +0000 UTCThis made me go awwwww. Canโt wait til it get released. You sounded great. Really love your voice on the verses and love the way you switched it up when you sang โthe love of my life.โ ๐
Dorie
2023-04-30 06:33:10 +0000 UTCThank you for the exclusive, itโs so, so good! ๐ The lyrics are incredible and hit hard, they could work on so many different sound productions but the vibe of the song works so well with them ๐๐ป
Jen ๐ฆ
2023-04-30 05:41:51 +0000 UTCSo great!! The chorus is definitely my favorite part!! Aww the ending is sweet, but sad!
Miriam
2023-04-30 05:21:21 +0000 UTCDid you not watch the high note challenge video? it's literally the standard I hold his vocals to
Mari
2023-04-30 04:58:58 +0000 UTCWell done! Love the lyrics and your voice ๐ถ๐ถ๐๐
Elli
2023-04-30 04:57:26 +0000 UTCYour voice is sooo good. You may have already mentioned this but how will we see your music course, will it be on youtube or a different Patreon tier? I love videos where you create songs :) โฆ I canโt wait. Iโm having withdraws-I need more Joel songs in my playlist! sniffy dust withdrawal lol..but this exclusive gave me a nice fix! thanks for sharing it with us early!
xtina ๐ค
2023-04-30 04:57:08 +0000 UTCWow very nice song
KRYSTAL HOWARD
2023-04-30 04:54:54 +0000 UTCWow I love it! Line 4 especially, and some of the next few lines, there's a kind of raspiness, gruffness that I don't think I've heard in your voice before. It's a very emotional and raw sound. What else could you do with this ๐ค
Sugary Magnolia
2023-04-30 04:46:31 +0000 UTCBeautiful, just beautiful...thank you ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐๐๐
Gayle
2023-04-30 04:10:05 +0000 UTCLove this song!! Thanks so much giving us an early listen. ๐ฅฐ๐ฅ๐๐๐ถ
Bookdragon 43
2023-04-30 04:01:17 +0000 UTCAbsolutely in love with this song! Thank you for giving us the chance to hear it first ๐
Becky Lorion
2023-04-30 03:48:55 +0000 UTCReview: โญโญโญโญโญโญโญโญ Hardworking boi made me smile. P.S. It's the weekend now. Please rest well.
โ ๏ธ Aslyn Jobry โ ๏ธ
2023-04-30 03:47:00 +0000 UTCSuch a heartwarming song! The lyrics are amazing. And the song has great movement and is something that will live in my head longer than just when hearing it play. Great job as always!
Courtney Walker
2023-04-30 03:44:00 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this sound! Especially the more acoustic/softer sound. The transitions were excellent and your voice is sounding better all the time! Can't wait to hear what you come up with next. โค๏ธ
Melissa
2023-04-30 03:43:59 +0000 UTCLove it awesome song
Stephanie Bruso
2023-04-30 03:43:02 +0000 UTCI was a little concerned with you calling a person an "it" but you made up for that with the last verse. I'm not crying.
Cas
2023-04-30 03:42:59 +0000 UTCThis is really cute. โค๏ธ I can only imagine how good it will sound mastered
Shauna
2023-04-30 03:42:45 +0000 UTCBeautiful, Joel <3. Very nicely done. Can't wait to see the course (even more excited for it now!).
Dannielle O'Neill
2023-04-30 03:41:10 +0000 UTCThat sounds so good. Love it a lot.
Melinda Young
2023-04-30 03:39:22 +0000 UTCFive out of five ๐ the concept is interesting and itโs a bop. Catchy as anything
Shiny
2023-04-30 03:38:27 +0000 UTCDuuuuuude I have chills! This is so good! You are crazy talented but thatโs no surprise! Iโm so excited for the course my eyes are gonna pop outta my head ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐๐๐
Aubrey Danielle
2023-04-30 03:37:46 +0000 UTCThis is so feel-good. And I love those orchestral sounding drums in the chorus, theyโre siiick. Thanks for giving us the early listen!!
emy
2023-04-30 03:35:04 +0000 UTCLOL same, right in the feels ๐
Mari
2023-04-30 03:34:16 +0000 UTCThis turned out so good!!!! I'm really vibing with all of this and I love the lyrics, they're very clever. You killed it with the vocals as well ๐ I wish I could put this on my spotify playlist lol โญโญโญโญโญ
Mari
2023-04-30 03:32:32 +0000 UTCAnd now Iโm cryingโฆ wtf Joelโฆ the lyrics are good play on words and how people view things and people these days, but the message is still soโฆ warm. Whether you meant it to be deep or not, they still ended up being โsmart lyricsโ as I call them. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
Airyckah Lane
2023-04-30 03:32:30 +0000 UTCIt sounds great! Can't wait for the course now ๐
Genevieve
2023-04-30 03:32:17 +0000 UTCThis is a great concept. I like this song
Lianne Conroy
2023-04-30 03:31:01 +0000 UTCโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Alle Engdahl
2023-04-30 03:30:59 +0000 UTC
