Chapter 6, Page 34...
Added 2021-12-26 20:28:12 +0000 UTC...Careful Meg. Your mask is slipping. :)
Not gonna lie, I find this page to be a tad lack luster. I love each panel, but it took much longer than a three panel page should (even considering the holidays), so I was expecting more from the final product. I think I need a day or two so I can see it with fresher eyes.
I hope everyone had a Merry Christmas and a fantastic holiday weekend! I'll have a more detailed report for you all tomorrow, but It was definitely the best Christmas I've had in many years!
Enjoy the rest of your weekend!
Comments
Iโm not sure where it could be squeezed in but maybe a thought bubble of Meg reminding herself to stay composed. I might be mistaken but I think this is the first time we see her get nervous while in character.
DuskStealth
2021-12-29 13:30:28 +0000 UTCIt looks good. I love the facial expressions. I bet meg is going to tell Ellie that she wasn't going to beat her as her present but then she ran away. Which is how Ellie now knows Meg plays dirty.
Rick
2021-12-29 10:49:19 +0000 UTCKeep it together, Meg! Remember your professional training!
PsyGremlin
2021-12-27 16:54:00 +0000 UTCIf this page is what you think may be "lackluster," I can't imagine what a more exciting version of it would be like! Sometimes keeping it simple is the best. Meg and Ellie are in their own little world of erotic fantasy now--everything else around them has melted away.
Shrub Jump
2021-12-27 15:22:06 +0000 UTCI think its lovely, thank you for posting!
GiatsuAkenori
2021-12-27 07:11:14 +0000 UTCLove it!! Really captures Meg's love for "the chase"
Sairaina
2021-12-27 04:31:21 +0000 UTCReally loving the expression work and Meg getting worked up herself.
kou32
2021-12-27 03:12:38 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas to you too ๐
SoulB-oss
2021-12-27 00:08:16 +0000 UTCI wouldn't call it lackluster at all. Maybe just that it's all leadup and won't really bite until we see the payoff?
Michael
2021-12-26 21:26:11 +0000 UTCHoo boy, the tax woman cometh, and she's about to collect her dues. Poor, lucky Ellie XD
NoMayGusta
2021-12-26 21:10:12 +0000 UTCMeg is absolutely right, Ellie has made her sweat, so she must be punished. :D
the_iceman
2021-12-26 20:49:33 +0000 UTCBest to judge the page and it's quality in context to what follows. That way you'll have some perspective to work with.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-12-26 20:37:39 +0000 UTCI'll agree with that.
Jordan Andrew Scherr
2021-12-26 20:37:12 +0000 UTCOh, this definitely looks like funishment.
Fritz Sands
2021-12-26 20:34:13 +0000 UTCMeg's getting VERY excited at the chance to whip her new sub...kinda scary in a funny way too. XD
Death of Ink
2021-12-26 20:34:04 +0000 UTCHer reward is more punishment. Just what she secretly wanted :D
Brad Kitts
2021-12-26 20:32:08 +0000 UTC
