Chapter 8, Page 41 (Updated)
Added 2024-07-11 03:43:56 +0000 UTCAnd the next two pages should be coming out soon! Fingers crossed! :)
*Update 07.12.2024 - Fixed panel 2 spelling error and adjusted blush in panels 4 and 5
Comments
Ellie's mind: "(TI__LT)" :D
Shrub Jump
2024-07-14 18:51:47 +0000 UTCAhh, that's MUCH better. 😁
Katt Wallingford
2024-07-12 19:38:56 +0000 UTCFixed! Thanks for the save! :)
Stereoscope Comics
2024-07-12 17:15:53 +0000 UTCI suppose you can argue it both ways, but I'm gonna suggest that - in the reader's frame of reference - not enough time has elapsed to properly justify this kind of callback. It's gonna take them around a minute to go from page 35 to page 41, and we've already clearly established that Ellie knows more than she's letting on. Thinking about the translation, I'll probably want to replace this with something like "Well, at least you know what it's for..."/"...that's a start." or somesuch. I've always been told to avoid repetition whenever possible. Gah; morning coffee strikes again; feel free to ignore me. ^_^'
Amber7
2024-07-12 09:29:17 +0000 UTCInteresting. I was hoping the callback/siting of Ellie’s forbidden knowledge would work for a laugh. It still works in my head, but I am looking at it with a bit more scrutiny. Also, thanks for using the word ‘penultimate’ correctly. :)
Stereoscope Comics
2024-07-12 03:40:50 +0000 UTCDear Ellie, my pet,.....I have so many toys for you to enjoy, it will be excited more from being restrained
Bruce Burding
2024-07-11 11:00:17 +0000 UTCI wonder if the penultimate panel is even necessary. In narrative terms it's almost an exact copy of the final panel from page 35 (down to the same wording used). It strikes me as being somewhat redundant. This would still be a perfectly cromulent scene if it just... wasn't there. Also, by now I'm running out of synonyms for "naughty" (which, regrettably, shares its word pool with "bad" in this weird language of mine). Not really a problem per se, just an odd little tidbit (I always get chatty after my first cup of joe 😝). PS. The l's in "IT'll" (2nd panel; bottom bubble) are in lowercase; that's a typo.
Amber7
2024-07-11 08:43:45 +0000 UTC*helping*
Katt Wallingford
2024-07-11 07:36:07 +0000 UTCGods, all of these recent pages have been so good. Not only are we getting a lot of great scenes and some lovely shots of the characters, but the general writing is so phenomenal. Seriously, keep up the amazing work.
Tendra Hinman
2024-07-11 07:15:33 +0000 UTCAll the pages are up but the numbers got mixed up a while back as I moved part of Val’s scene messing up the page order. I’ve been meaning to go in and fix that. Sorry for the confusion.
Stereoscope Comics
2024-07-11 06:52:49 +0000 UTCAh-ha! I see what you mean. I think I know how to fix that. Thanks!👍
Stereoscope Comics
2024-07-11 06:50:00 +0000 UTCEllie's getting a *tad* hot under the collar over this eventuality. 🤭
Death of Ink
2024-07-11 06:14:31 +0000 UTCCan you link to 37? the only ones I see are 30-35, and now 38-41. :(
Casey
2024-07-11 06:03:24 +0000 UTC37, 39, and 40 are up, but I'm not seeing 36...
Hurog
2024-07-11 05:53:48 +0000 UTCThe blush over the bottom of her face in the last two panels seems... off. Looks too much like a mask. Also not sure if one can blush that close to lips. I dunno. I'm not really an artist, so I can't really provide the most technically informed feedback. It just seems weird to me. 😕
Katt Wallingford
2024-07-11 05:26:25 +0000 UTCMental scenarios running through Ellie's head
Brad Kitts
2024-07-11 03:51:12 +0000 UTCDid I miss 36, 37, 39, and 40? :O
Casey
2024-07-11 03:47:05 +0000 UTCEllie.exe has stopped functioning, please reboot
kou32
2024-07-11 03:46:36 +0000 UTC
