Something Borrowed - Page 16
Added 2022-11-17 23:34:13 +0000 UTCGlad to be in the wrapping up stage now! Might do a few more pin ups before heading back into part 3 (tentatively titled 'Bun-Snatchers').
Finishing this up, I feel like 17 pages might be stretching it a bit as a 'short' - would more concise 8 or 10 pagers be better in the future, or would you feel short changed?
Comments
Thanks, JT. I think that's what I wanted to hear! I was worried that the story was taking too long more than anything and didn't want anybody getting bored, or the pages getting repetitive.
Abe Snake
2022-11-18 16:59:13 +0000 UTCPersonally, I'm not put off if a 'short' is as engaging & sexy as this episode was. Also, being a consumer of your creative work, I admit to being selfish and wanting more rather than less- despite the time & effort you put in- so go ahead and define 'short' as longer than what you were thinking if you want!
JT
2022-11-18 08:53:31 +0000 UTC
