Danny's Diner - Feedbag Challenge Comic Page 9 WIP12
Added 2021-02-17 18:16:54 +0000 UTCAt the last minute, we decided that having more than one panel emphasizing the countdown clock was a little redundant and decided to change it up a little bit. Doing it this way is a much better visual way to represent what's going to happen next, which is what you really want in a good comic. Even without dialogue, the audience can now tell that what's about to happen has something to do with timing and a lot of extra folks. Much more interesting to follow. :)
Comments
:} Glad ya think so! I think it was a really positive change to the flow of the piece! ^^
Agro Alba & Segremores Moon
2021-02-18 03:51:28 +0000 UTCWhoa yeah! This is way more dramatic and conveys the tension perfectly. Always excited to see the next page but now I'm super stoked!
Randy Hoss
2021-02-17 18:19:49 +0000 UTC
