Early $10+ Preview: Page 167
Added 2018-10-30 19:37:45 +0000 UTCBriar steps up!
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Whew, 5 pages in the buffer now. Hopefully I can get another 5 in soon. Regrettably, with my health being what it is, it probably won't return to twice a week anytime soon, but a substantial buffer will help me a lot!
Composition notes:
Originally panels 1 and 2 were roughly the same size, but then I realized that it would make both panels better to make 1 smaller and 2 bigger. That way, 1 is sort of overcrowded and overbearing with the argument, and 2 sort of has Briar stepping in and making space by SHOUTING REAL LOUD.
I had to be careful with panels 3 and 4 because I copy-pasted the sketch and flipped it. It looked it, too. So I tried to make it less aggressively the same when I inked it.
Comments
Briar had to open up another can of whoop-ass on these two. Good of her to step in and show these two how bad they're messing things up for everybody! Great page. Stubat
D. Stuart
2018-10-31 07:06:58 +0000 UTC
