SoL :: Page 396 WIP (Help me with Dialogue!)
Added 2023-12-12 05:04:31 +0000 UTCHEY ALL! Help me decide on some dialogue!
In the fic, it says Papyrus is "talking about everything he saw in the human city" but doesn't give specific dialogue. Any ideas on what I could put here? I'll need some random dialogue to place that would fade as Sans drifts off into a daydream about Frisk!
Papyrus carried the bag of groceries walking ahead, talking about everything he saw in the human city while Sans trudged behind him, not listening. There was a few things on his mind. His little lady naturally took center stage these days, but his other concern was coming in his line of vision.
Comments
that is ADORABLE... I'm running out of space, so I'll just add something about greasy food!!! I love it!!! Thank you!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:15:59 +0000 UTCGreasy food, possibly any cars(Theyre really rare in Fell City iirc) Or maybe people talking about 'moving picture shows'
Ardelia
2023-12-12 08:14:34 +0000 UTCOh you’re right, lmao😂!
Alegro 🍉
2023-12-12 08:11:10 +0000 UTCLMAO!! I might not put in something too detailed, but I really like the "Humans are so strange/are the rudest creatures" Line!!!! I'll add that in!!! Thank you so much!!!! xD <3
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:07:42 +0000 UTCSO TRUE!! "-And everything is so small! Far too small! We'll have to have amenities shipped from the city for our new place of residence!" Perfect!! Thank you!!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:04:44 +0000 UTCYES! "Lacking in good manners..." I'll add that in!!! Perfect!!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:03:25 +0000 UTCI like that. He has seen the park and its state, but I think other places are dirty, too, plus maybe overrun. Maybe it's even worse elsewhere. Like the city center, the train station, a poor district, the red light district. I think he would be disgusted by the living conditions of the people and the state of the city. You could combine that with some rude manners of the people.
catsunelli
2023-12-12 08:03:17 +0000 UTCLet me think… “YOU KNOW, SANS. THE HUMANS IN THE CITY ARE SO STRANGE. FIRST I THOGHT THE ARE THE RUDEST CREATURES I HAVE EVER MET, BUT THEN I MANAGED TO GET TO KNOW MYSELF BETTER. AND THIS IS THANKS TO THE HELP OF ONE WHO I THINK IS… AN ADMIRER... WAIT, ARE YOU LISTENING TO ME?” “… Uhm?…” It’s just a jet idea, but I hope it’s a good starting point.😅❤️
Alegro 🍉
2023-12-12 08:03:09 +0000 UTCLMAO!!! That's perfect!! xD I love it so much! I"ll add that in!!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:02:57 +0000 UTCVERY TRUE! "rude little creatures..." Perfect! I'll add that!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:02:44 +0000 UTCGREAT suggestion!!! I'm putting that in!!
Melikas
2023-12-12 08:02:26 +0000 UTChe would definitely talk about how small everything is? since monsters are bigger their amenities must be too, but since humans are smaller, well...
dar
2023-12-12 06:35:39 +0000 UTCAbout people keep looking at him: "You know, Sans, some humans can be downright rude. I was walking, minding my own business, and they shot me these glares. Maybe they were intimidated by my towering presence, or perhaps they're just lacking in good manners."
LT
2023-12-12 05:56:47 +0000 UTCHe saw a dog, that wasn't nearly as battle capable as those on snowdin. Gotta brag whenever possible.
Emily Barber
2023-12-12 05:24:45 +0000 UTCHe might take bad about the human he meet at the apartment building about how rude they were
Dania Palestino
2023-12-12 05:22:51 +0000 UTCI feel like paps should mention how dirty and poorly kept the park is and how some buildings look run down??
ohbarnacles
2023-12-12 05:11:13 +0000 UTC
