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Trinity - The Three and the One - Ch 7

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Trinity - The Three and the One - Ch 7

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Really? This is an easier read (thus far) than most of Rabble's stuff to me. Rabble's stories often lead into cruel territory; this one, at least, isn't quite there yet.

Crowny Succubus

I've appreciated most of Vivian's and Rabble's individual works but this is a hard read.

Vicki Smith

After reading some of Rabbieland other works, this is reading like one of his stories where the husband is shit though the whole series. They never end well and reading their ongoing stories they won't end well either, all husband are just broken with the wife's nothing they done it to them and not caring.

Dean

I think Collin’s character development is way too slow. His wife being groomed and will be a willing sex slave for them. I just want to see what happens with Jack sends Collin pic’s of his wife sucking him off and Jack realizes that Collin is not ok with it. Does Collin blow it up in a very public way, or does he sulk into the shadows and allow them to take his wife, marriage and manhood. Because let’s face it Cassidy already wants Jack to fuck a baby into her, and Kelly is all for it bending Cass to submit to Jack in every way possible.

FU

Cass is a selfish CUNT. Kelly and Jack are masters at manipulation and grooming her not only to be their personal fuck toy, but at some point they will share her with others. Collin is as dumb as a rock if he thinks she just went over for lunch. Great writing as usual, but I thought you said that this was not your typical 💩show CUCK STORY. I want to see Collin get his without Cass, Kelly or Jack manipulating him.

FU

I’m still enjoying the story, I think the writing quality is great as always and the sex scene was hot! And I got to admit, Cass and Kelly have a very hot dynamic in the bedroom. It’ll definitely be an a heavy hit to their marriage if/when Collin finds out. Legitimate lying and cheating like that obviously destroys trust. And Collin being unaware of just how much his wife is changing and acting like she’s the same woman prior to her threesome is, imo, setting up a potentially devastating reveal to Collin. Not to mention how Cass is trying to justify things from any angle she can manage so she can satisfy her newly discovered fantasy. Not sure how she’d be able to spin it without taking accountability. I just hope Collin doesn’t immediately forgive Cass and leap into the role of a cuck once he finds out, if he even sticks around. I’m kinda bored of that trope since it’s all over the place. It’ll be interesting to see where things go from here and hope for some compelling twists and developments!

Bryce Johnson

There's no way, even if he's just lying to himself so he can feel better or just so he act like he trust his wife. He would not be this stupid, why would a woman even marry someone this blind about what's goin on. Why would she want to bear his his children for fear of passing his genes on to their offspring. It gets depressing reading chapter after chapter about a man who you have to wonder if he can even tie his own shoes. On the subject of chapters there's prolly only been if added up one chapter that's not about the wife and her three some sex. We get it, she's a whore for the preacher and his wife, I'm ready for a chapter that's actually goin to deal with the effects that's the sex is having on their imploding marriage.

Dean


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