SE;ki redawn! chapter one page 9
Added 2018-08-06 17:11:15 +0000 UTCah i was trying out new pen settings and i accidentally inked and finished page 9 of chapter one :P lol
now, im not done sketching all of chapter one yet..but i haven't made much progress with that for like a year so maybe i should start inking lol cos i wanna finish this someday.. D:
what do you think?
also can i ask for some feedback, im trying a bit of a different style :D
less tone but cleaner lines ^^;
how does it look? im not 100% sure..does it look boring? should i make the lines thinner?
here are the other of redrawn chapter one: https://www.patreon.com/posts/se-ki-chapter-1-8184014
Comments
You are your own worst critic. But, I stand firm in saying that it's not boring at all. And if you prefer doing tone like this, then go for it! Do what you want to do. Everybody has a different opinion, so in the end, you need to do what YOU want to do.
Meghan Mobley
2018-09-03 23:55:18 +0000 UTCim glad you like it! :D i feel like it looks a biiit boring.. but i prefer doing tone like this :P
rukan kawayama
2018-08-07 15:26:53 +0000 UTCI actually really like it like this. It's not boring at all. It's clean and not overcrowded or anything. Draws your eyes to the most important parts.
Meghan Mobley
2018-08-07 13:55:22 +0000 UTC
