Editing Marathon: Chapter Eighty Four.
Added 2024-10-03 02:56:19 +0000 UTCHi guys.
Here is Chapter Eighty-Four.
Thanks for all the help. It means a lot to me.
Regards,
BlaQQuill.
Comments
I considered that, but after going over the book a second time. I decided to just keep it the way it currently is. Thanks for the suggestion though...
BlaQQuill
2024-10-03 03:59:40 +0000 UTCI highly recommend thinking about stopping the first book towards the start of this chapter. At the end of #19. Just that currently there is too much plot development in chapter 88 without enough dialogue to support it without it feeling rushed. Just trying to assist.
David Siviour
2024-10-03 03:57:45 +0000 UTC
