DRR Chapters 52 & 53 edited, 54+ tomorrow
Added 2024-04-29 15:46:23 +0000 UTCJust wanted you guys to know I've edited chapters 52 and 53 a bunch (they're both 3k+ chapters now). I'll summarize the changes further down in this post if you don't want to reread the chapters. 54 will be coming tomorrow since it's also a longer-than-usual chapter, maybe along with 55 depending on how this toothache decides to treat me.
Changes for 52 & 53:
More grounding for Ethan's situation; he's a little more concerned about what's actually happening with his body and what's left with Bimar/Ahkelios
Tiebacks to the main plot (concern for Guard and Whisper's situation, mostly)
Ethan making an active attempt to connect with his body and figure out what's going on outside the Mind Vault while talking to Gheraa
Fleshed out the characterization a bit more
Comments
I'm on the edge of my seat here
Seth Daems
2024-04-30 12:15:00 +0000 UTC
